Is My Redesign Too Simple? - Virtual Assistant Forums

#1 (**permalink**) 12-09-2009

Hi everyone,

I've changed my VA site significantly recently and I'm wondering if I made it too simple. I switched to Wordpress and found a free template that fit and then I ruthlessly cut much of the text to make it more simple. I also removed my long services list and started using categories of services I provide. I'd love to get some feedback to see if I've gone too far to make it more simple.

Thanks!

Bonnie

#2 (**permalink**) 12-09-2009

Pretty! I have not looked into the content but my first impression is positive. I like the color, the header, etc.

#3 (**permalink**) 12-10-2009

Hi Bonnie,

I think it looks great. My thoughts are there is just enough information to get the perspective client to contact you and not so much they feel overwhelmed.

#4 (**permalink**) 12-10-2009

I think the website looks great and seems to be just right in terms of content. I love the hip girl on the stool. Cool looking yet professional. Nice

#5 (**permalink**) 12-10-2009

Hi Bonnie;

Love the look of your site - nice and clean and just the right amount of info on each page. In quick scan of content I found the following that you may consider updating:

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My clients make more money after they start working for me because I keep the marketing engine going while they do what they do best… speaking, consulting, coaching or providing products and services.

I think you meant to say "after they start working with me..."

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You can use the Paypal button below to pay for the service and then e-mail the twenty pieces of content to

I did not see a Paypal button below as you indicate.

Your site is very clear and I applaud you for outlining how you choose and work with your clients -- this makes choosing your services very easy for prospective clients.

Good luck,

#6 (**permalink**) 12-10-2009

I think your website looks great Bonnie and it has just the right amount of information. Well done.

#7 (**permalink**) 12-10-2009

Bonnie I think you've done a fabulous job!

#8 (**permalink**) 12-11-2009

The site looks very professional and clear. There's just the right amount of information to entice a client to get in touch with you if they want more details. It looks Great too!

#9 (**permalink**) 12-17-2009

I really like how you have the site laid out. I am a fan of the darker backgrounds, which I use on my site too. The information is good.

Here are my two comments/suggestions:

The logo.....I really want to like the logo, but I don't.....I think the idea of using a "cartoon" type of character is just fine and I've seen other websites that use that same type of concept. But when I look at her, I don't see a professional - which I could probably get over. There's something about her eyes that isn't very welcoming - it could totally be just ME.

Clients Page......you have a very extensive list of clients and that is going to tell a prospective client that you are well established. However, what would be of much higher value to me if I were in there shoes would be a Testimonials page vs. a list. Even if you just had a handful of testimonials on that page, I think it would be more important to me than just a list.

Just my two cents!!!

#10 (**permalink**) 12-17-2009

Bonnie,

Great job, however my three comments are:

1. The logo. When I look at I think of my teen children and all the technology they are into. I like the logo but not to convey a professional image. This is just my 2 cents but I cannot seem to get past that.

2. Client list. I know it says past and present but prospects will not see this. They will see a laundry list and wonder how a one person office has time to service all the clients on the list. I would change this to testimonials or pare it down to a great short list.

3. Policies. "I will not take on more than one client in the same field or who sells the same type of product." This would make me leave your page immediately. I would not even waste my time to pursue after looking at your long client list.

Hope this helps.

#11 (**permalink**) 12-17-2009

Hi Bonnie,

Your site has a nice clean, non-cluttered look. I also like 'dark' sites, but I agree with Kari & Lee that the young girl does not convey a professional image, but rather a teen image.

I have resisted writing a review because I was really put off by two of your policies.

Your first policy: I will not take clients who are in the adult industry in any capacity. I respect your feelings on this, but IMO, the tone comes across as judgmental & the fact that you place this policy first, emphasizes it. I'm not into that kind of entertainment, but if I were a potential client, I would immediately click away from your site upon reading this. Can you re-phrase it so it doesn't sound so harsh? Suggestion: While I do not accept clients in the adult entertainment industry, I will be happy to refer you to a quality VA who will. (You can refer them to me!

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Your last policy: I will only take on clients who are a good match with my work style and temperament. The tone of this policy grates on me as well. It makes me wonder why you feel you have to address this before you have even met me. This policy leaves me with the feeling that you might be the one who is difficult to work with. Personally, I would take both these policies off your site & only address them when they become an issue.

I think your Home page is strong. I love this line: Get started on turbocharging your business for 2010. Leave your competitors in the dust! I also love the little monkey scratching his head. Overall, I think your site is strong with a good amount of info. You offer some really nice services & I can see why you have an extensive client list.

Lezly

#12 (**permalink**) 12-31-2009

Quick glance at it and i LOVE it. Good job.