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Well I finally finished my updated version and it is all W3C compliant.

Let me know what you think and if you find any errors or typos.

www.myofficeassist.org
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Hi Lee,

I must say, I really like your website! I didn't read all of the content, but the look and feel of your site is very good. I like the way you display your information on each page. Did you use a template or design it on your own?
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I used a template from Expression web and tweeked the CSS to fit my liking. It took me forever to find the right mix of styles and what to include. Thanks for the positive feedback.
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Hi Darlene -

I like your site! It's clean, crisp and very professional looking - and has a nice flow to it! Can I ask - what is W3C compliant??ut:

Couple of quick comments.

Many of your graphics seem either "scrunched" - or very blurry.

The font size on the side bars - like where you list advantages - are very hard to read. I really have to squint to see what it says. Doesn't need to be much larger, but maybe 1font point?

When having a title to a section or page, you should use the first letter cap of each word method. There are some exceptions to this rule -and there are some words that are less than 4 letters that you cap - but generally you do not cap a,an,the,and, as, but, if, or, nor, at, by, for, in, of, off, on, out, to, up...This is based on the Gregg Reference manual's list of rules, if you are so inclined to look at the exceptions.

On your Terms page you should remove the colons after each of the paragraph headings.

Last thing I noticed is that under the Errors & Omissions section on your Terms page, the first sentence is indented by one space.

Overall it looks awesome and should draw some attention! I love the picture of you! ...and I love the resource & affiliate pages.

Pam
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I love your site. The colors are very inviting and it seems very well put together. Thank you for sharing
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Great site, it looks very professional.
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The graphics seem a bit squeezed.

Portfolio page: This has a comment on the page that I am not fond of, but somone else might not be so auf'd like me. I don't like it when people tell me to be patient while pages are being constructed. It makes me feel as if they are assuming that I am not a patient person by saying that. I think it is good enough to say, 'Coming Soon' or something like that. I would also hyperlink the 'feel free to contact me' back to your contact page or open up an email when they click on those words on that same page.

Very nice website. Clean, clear and well-thought out.

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Thanks to all who have given me great suggestions for improvement. I am still working on it to get it to my satisfaction. And my goal is to have it complete by the end of this week.
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