I really like your brochure, Nancy! I definitely like the graphical representation that you have on the inside. I love pictures!
Just some friendly notes for your work in progress:
In your circles, check out your capitalization. In some of your circles, you start with a capitalized word underneath your headings while in others you don't.
Also, be consistent with the sentence structure in your circles and on your side panels. Some are complete sentences while others are fragments. Sometimes it helps to read the sentences out loud and hear how it sounds. I'm definitely not perfect so it happens to me all the time lol!
I like the idea of plus and equal signs with the circles, however, some of the plus are distorted. Perhaps, making a web or lines leading to the the man in the middle from each circle would make it a little cleaner.
Other than that I like how you made the About You section very warm and personable and I definitely love the format of your brochure. Great Job!