Also need tag line help - Virtual Assistant Forums

#1 (**permalink**) 08-22-2008

Hiya,

I have several tag lines and am not sure which one is better:

PA Excellence Limited
Taking care of business

PA Excellence Limited
Advance your business by outsourcing

PA Excellence Limited
Outsource solutions for your business

PA Excellence Limited
Outsourcing to grow your business

They all sound so lame.

#2 (**permalink**) 08-22-2008

Out of all of them I like "Taking Care of Business". It's catchy. How about Taking care of your business?

#3 (**permalink**) 08-22-2008

I agree wih Janice,

Taking Care of Your Business, sounds catchy.

Sincerely,
sy(Sheila)

#4 (**permalink**) 08-22-2008

Though it's a bit longer, it's still within the 7-9 word length for a tag line I've been told is best. How about this?

Excelling at Taking Care of Your Business

#5 (**permalink**) 08-23-2008

I'm not excelling yet!

Thanks for your help, I will work on these two options and leave the others behind.

#6 (**permalink**) 08-23-2008

I like the Excelling at Taking Care of Your Business

#7 (**permalink**) 08-23-2008

The only problem with this one is that it's very long and for my logo I want the tag line underneath the PA Excellence. When I try to fit it underneath the font for the tag line will be very small. I will play around with the logomaker.com a bit and see how to fit it, but the shorter one might be easier to include in the logo.

Thanks for the feedback.

#8 (**permalink**) 08-23-2008

You may not be excelling yet--but you will! Do reconsider the length. I think the message will be much more important than if it fits within a certain area. You might see if there's a way you might re-work it all to make it fit together.

#9 (**permalink**) 08-23-2008

How about Taking excellent care of your business? Idea from hubby.

#10 (**permalink**) 08-24-2008

Originally Posted by KiwiVA

How about Taking excellent care of your business? Idea from hubby.

That's it! I think that still says it all and is a bit shorter. I really, really like that. Isn't great to be able to brainstorm on the forums like this, go back and forth, and finally come up with something you know will work?

I've posted a thread about a teleclass I'm a guest speaker on next month asking for suggestions about a worksheet and/or quiz to help people see where they could use a virtual assistant. Check out my thread and please reply with any ideas you have.

Let us know what you finally decide on for your tagline!