I think--I hope--I may have found it...The Tagline for my business!

Here goes:

The work you love, the time you deserve.

It sounds nice. What do you think of mine?

Do What You Do Best... Let LRD Don The Rest!

Hey.

alcbiz : It's not bad. Sounds nice, good flow but it also sounds like you may be offering them work to do. I really like the 'time you deserve' part though.

How about ... "So you can do the work you love, get the time you deserve and we handle the other things."

Hmmm... sounds nice too, but may sound like you are promising too much. but it's an idea for you to run with.

lrd : very nice.

Kim.

alc - sounds good but agree with Kim's comments and needs tweeking. Thought Kim's suggestion too long but good starting ground to combine yours and hers and delete from there.

good LRD - just curious re Don (know meaning, but is there a double meaning i.e. is your name Don or perhaps have pic of Godfather in your logo?)

alcbiz. Show nice but I agree with Kim that it sounds like you are offering them work. How about "We do the work because you deserve the time". Just a suggestion...
Wendy

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Originally Posted by burneyvoa

alcbiz. How about "We do the work because you deserve the time". Just a suggestion... Wendy

Like it...but not sure it's complete enough.

Originally Posted by lrdurham

Do What You Do Best... Let LRD Don The Rest!

I'm not sure I understand what the 2nd half is trying to say.

I think lrdurham meant: Do What You Do Best... Let LRD Do The Rest! <--- I like it!

alcbiz, I think you have a good start - though (for me) the tagline is just a bit hard to sort out relative to what it is I know you do.

What about something like "Giving you time to do the work you love" or
"Freeing you up to..." etc.

It might help if we knew what your company name is.

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Sorry... Its supposed to be:

Do What You Do Best... Let LRD Do The Rest!

alcbiz: The work you love, the time you deserve.

Hi,
How about: We grant the Service you Command - You get the Wish you Desire

I was wondering how / where will you use the tagline? as a signature on your email? letterhead? etc?