I don't like the background and feel it is distracting. You're probably better off to have something that isn't distracting, or no background at all, just a plain colour (not white).
Remove the guest book - that really is something for social sites or personal sites, but a business site really doesn't have a place for it. If you wanted to get rid of the services on the home page and keep that info for the services page, you could also remove the moving images (another distraction) and keep the front page short and to the point.
Perhaps the para on the about page 'committed to ....' could be put on the front page. The LinkedIn logo you have for your recommendations doesn't look right and I suspect might not fit in with LinkedIn's terms of service regarding use of their logo. Have a look at https://developer.linkedin.com/docum...es#general-use
for details about using a logo for them on your site.
As for the content, what you've done is good and the general layout is good. The selection of images you have in the moving part on the front are good, but perhaps should be used individually, not in a moving section like you have.
I think you're very close to a finished product and I'm sure you will get a good response from it when attracting clients.