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Old 05-19-2012
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Good afternoon everyone. I have been continually making changes on my website and would like to ask for some feedback from this forum. I am in the process of learning and creating a site using Wordpress but will not convert my site for awhile.

Please let me know what you think. www.trinityvas.com

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Old 05-20-2012
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Hi Terri

I love the colour of your website! The only thing I would say is that the bold background makes some of the text a little difficult to read, especially on the About Us page.

I also like the sentence: "A Virtual Assistant (VA) is a highly-trained independent entrepreneur who provides a myriad of business support services."

You say you have a lot of experience in the health insurance industry. Have you thought about making that your niche? It's not something everyone can do so maybe you can gain a little bit of an edge there...

I was going to say that I didn't get the duck photo on your Services page but then I saw the catchphrase so it all made sense. I also like the fact you state your rates.

Your website is clear and straight to the point so the only "criticism" I have is the bold background and maybe pulling your email and phone number to the left a little so that it is all on one line. Great job!
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Old 05-21-2012
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Thank you Sabrina! I like the background but do agree it might be a bit bold for the sight. I will continue looking for something a little milder. As for my niche, not sure I want to work for insurance anymore (especially with agents) but it may be something I rethink in the near future. LOL. Thanks again!
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I love your new website, Terri. I have to agree with Sabrina that the background sets me off a little bit but overall a very good site.
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Thank you Wendy...I am on the prowl for a new background!
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Alright Ladies, I have changed the background. What do you think now?
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Very nice trandall. I like the site.
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Thank you for checking it out moiraesfate!
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I have more changes and would like your opinions. Please let me know what you think.

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Looks great, nice and clear and straightforward

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Hello Teri,

I really like your website and the colors. The green in my opinion has a really nice bold feel to.

The only thing I'm thinking is maybe you don't need the services page because you list your services on the home page. With that in mind maybe you can change your Services page to you rate page and do a cost comparison/ calculator there instead.
Or you can remove the services from the home page and keep your list of services on the Service page only.

Very nicely done!
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I think it looks nice--professional, informative, straightforward. Excellent job!
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Hi Terry,

I like the colors, Well done!
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Hi Terri,

I just came upon this thread and looked at your site. I think it looks pretty good! My one thought was this: On your "services" page, I would consider moving the "ducks" picture above the "customer service support" section so that it ties in directly and visually with your tagline up top. (Let Trinity Virtual Assistant Services help you get your ducks in a row.)

It looks nice and clean, which I think is great! Nice job!
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Nice site. I would consider removing your email address since you have email contact forms on your site. You don't want to be bombarded with a bunch of spam. Then I would bold your phone number so it's easier to find and read.
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I don't like the background and feel it is distracting. You're probably better off to have something that isn't distracting, or no background at all, just a plain colour (not white).

Remove the guest book - that really is something for social sites or personal sites, but a business site really doesn't have a place for it. If you wanted to get rid of the services on the home page and keep that info for the services page, you could also remove the moving images (another distraction) and keep the front page short and to the point.

Perhaps the para on the about page 'committed to ....' could be put on the front page. The LinkedIn logo you have for your recommendations doesn't look right and I suspect might not fit in with LinkedIn's terms of service regarding use of their logo. Have a look at https://developer.linkedin.com/docum...es#general-use for details about using a logo for them on your site.

As for the content, what you've done is good and the general layout is good. The selection of images you have in the moving part on the front are good, but perhaps should be used individually, not in a moving section like you have.

I think you're very close to a finished product and I'm sure you will get a good response from it when attracting clients.
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Thank you for all you input. I have taken all your suggestions into consideration and made some more changes. I will continue to make changes as time goes by. One thing I haven't changed is the background. I haven't found anything that catches my eye just yet but I am still looking. I don't like plain white or the solid color without some light texture. Take a look...

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