Over the last few weeks I've put a lot of hours into my site changes. Please let me know your thoughts and if there's areas I should add.

http://savvysubcontracting.com

Hi Collette,

Your sight is very unique. Your specialty is subcontracting for service providers. You don't see that often, so you have a chance to run ahead of the pack.

Did you know that your home page goes straight to your "About Me" page?

If your home page is not built yet...
Here's a suggestion. I like the subtitles "Hire a Team, Join a Team, Build a Team".

These should be your main focus points on your home page. You can use similar language as already written under the headings on your about page, but take out the "I" language.

Tell the service provider why they absolutely need you - Right Now! Make sure you write almost nothing about yourself, but what they may be experiencing now that would make them need you immediately.

Hope this helps. You guys are doing great with getting these sites up. They are very professional.

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I think it is great! == actually right up my alley

I am a little brain dead right now - but check this out

"My mentor, Diane Hess, of the Certified Virtual Professional program. http://certifiedvp.com had a huge part in ??? getting started as a virtual service provider."

"My passion working with multiple software packages lead (should this be led?) me to realize many people are not sure

was in hurry and did not check out for sure the above - but thought would bring to your attention - or up for vote.