Hello everyone,
I have just developed my website and although I need to change a couple of things, I would love your input. You might see things that I haven't thought of or maybe don't need. I appreciate your insights.
virtual4u.net

When I opened your website, my first impression was - all things good! It is a beautiful design and the site is well written. The amount of information you provided seems "just right". There is a minor typo under "Qualities You Can Expect", in the line "Strong Wok Ethic" (I think you meant 'work'?). Good job on this site - you should be proud!

Way to go!
Congratulations!

Jolene

Looks great! Congratulations and good luck!

My best,
Rebecca

Thank you. Especially for the spelling error. I don't want anyone to think I'm great at wok cooking.

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lisa

Looks great - very professional. One note: some of your paragraphs are left justified and some are full justified. I would make them all the same. (I like full justified the best, it looks cleaner.)

Good Luck,
Julie

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Julie | Virtual Resource Services, Inc (VRSI)
http://www.vrsioffice.com

Very professional. I love the color palette. Good Luck.

I love the site; Good luck

Betty "The Smart Choice"

In a quick glance through your site, my first impression is that you should crop your beautiful picture of the lake so that the date stamp is not visible. Other than that, the site is wonderful.

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Serita Diana, the List 2 Close Assistant
REVA Academy

Hi

I agree with Serita about cropping your picture, maybe even have a number of scenic pictures on a slow slide show.

Also noted nother couple of spelling errors in TERMS - freight spelt freigt and stationery spelt stationary. (assuming you mean office supplies and not kepping still)

Also I prefer the PRICES page layout with the bullet points rather than the table in the SERVICES page. The table look uneven and a little messy as not all rows are equally spaced.

You can still have the explanations for each bullet point
ADMINISTRATIVE-BOOKKEEPING

* Word Processing / Document Creation
Word processing is the creation, input, editing and production of documents and
texts using computer systems.

* Correspondence
Email, Faxing, Letters


You get the idea. Just a suggestion.

Cheers

Fiona