Hi Stepfanie, I am very impressed with your site's appearance. It's crisp and clean. I agree with Carol about alternating between "we" and "I". I didn't read each page word for word but I did notice on your Fees page where you wrote "We save you time and money versus a tradition employee" instead of traditional employee. Good luck with your business!!!

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Jána :daisy:
www.virtually-supporting-you.com

Hey Stephanie,
I looked at your website. I did not 'critique' the website. I think it looks great. You are off to a great start.

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Shante'

Thanks so much! I haven't had time to go back and tweak it much

I think the site looks great, it loaded fast. It looks professional and it is straight to the point. Good job!

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Melissa

Hi Stephanie
You must have already made some of the updates, because I think your site looks great..

It was clear and precise and the flow of the website was great. I enjoy a website that is very informative that allows me to make a decision on the type of service they can offer me just by researching their site.

Your website is a professional site, and such a great picture of yourself posted as well.

I wish you the best in your business, keep us in the loop of all your success!

Ahh another Office Live template. Why do I say that? 'Cuz you can't do what you want! I have one too.

I made my VA biz on the "fly" because a client of mine suggested I should "branch" out and try it. Although I do basic websites, I haven't worked in that field for a couple years. I ran across the Office Live and decided to just "do it". While they are GREAT for Workspaces, FREE site building and their "pre-mades", you are stuck with their templates.

No adding your own scripts, no managing your own layouts etc.

For this reason, I suggest you "break away" from that. My Office Live site is still live, but I have recently begun building it from scratch in FrontPage. (you may like DreamWeaver).

However, as for your content...
The graphic on the home page needs to be optimized. It's fuzzy.
Your "About us" page is wonderful!
Your content is neat, clean, and to the point.

I would suggest working a bit more on your graphics but for content, I love it!

Hugz, Judy

Love the colors and design of the site, only 2 very small things i noticed is on your Services page the first item in the list "Article Writing" is slightly off to the right, backspace it a touch and it will line up and look better. You've also written "Here we have a list of services I provide. Maybe just put "here is a list of" or "here are the services i provide".
Other than those 2 little things, great job

Stepfanie, I love your site! I also didn't critique it but I didn't have to spend a ton of time there either because it's loaded with just the facts! Maybe it's just me but when I open a site, if it's too "wordy", I pass. They touch on that in my html class and it's something I'm in full agreement with. In my opinion, it's awesome! It's readable, easy to navigate, and it opened very quickly for me. You can update and add to it as you go along. Nice work!
p.s. You did this in a day??!!!! I didn't know anything about Office Live (I'm so new at this stuff..one of the pitfalls of my being a cubicle rat for 20+ years)!

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Barb
Iken Organize

Originally Posted by stepfanie

I worked all day on this website and wanted to get some opinions from you wonderful VA's. I don't have my number or fax number on there yet because I'm waiting for my business phone service. What are your *honest* opinion? What am I missing? (Coz I feel like I'm missing something) Thanks! www.advantageva.com

I think it looks great. You can always add more as you go.

I updated my website adding pictures I took this morning.

Thanks so much for all the great input!