Re: Would Love Your Input!
I think it looks great. Easy to navigate, nice colors, clean, relaxing. I just have a couple thoughts.
1 - on the first page your list of 3 reasons doesn't really stand out. I would either make them an ordered list which would indent the text on the 2nd/3rd lines or I would put a line between each to separate them a bit more. I'd also bold the save space, money, time statements to make them stand out. I would also bold the "why hire a VA" heading and perhaps make it a size larger to stand out.
2 - I would put your contact info under your nav menu on the left so that it's on each page. Then I'd move the "don't wait call us" under the center column.
3 - Increase the font size on your landing page so it's the same size as the rest of the website.
4 - the picture on your about page is weird. It's of a man and a woman yet in the text you talk about two women and no men. Is that an actual picture of you? If not I wouldn't use it because people will assume that's you. If it is you I'd try to get one with either your partner or just you alone instead of some guy you don't talk about.
5 - on the about page on the bottom your phone number is wrapping at the area code on my screen so you might want to put in a hard return to keep it all together. You might consider putting in some sort of a divider under your personal profiles to separate those from your affiliations. And I'd label that area because right now I really have no idea what all of that is. You may also consider having text links because I don't allow scripts (and lots of people don't) so I can't see anything besides blank boxes. I would also put the "we are in rochester" info above the affiliations because as it is now you're telling them info about you, then linking them to other places, then telling them more info about you. Your info is more important so should be higher on the page.
6 - on the services page I wouldn't center everything. Perhaps center the info on the page but left justify everything and use bullet points. I find centered text harder to read and it reminds me a bit of old school pages.
7 - on your contact page, is all of that info required to submit the form? if not, I'd put an * next to what's required because personally I wouldn't fill out anything that asked me for my complete mailing address. You may also want to have them choose which contact method they prefer (email or phone) and what time is good (including time zone).
8 - definitely get rid of the godaddy!
Hope that helps. If it doesn't make sense, just let me know. I also didn't read for content, just so you know.
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