Hi everyone. I'm finishing up my website and wanted to get some feedback on it. I have to to a couple of more things like add some pics, clean up my logo and add the paypal link but would still love for you guys to look at it.

http://www.mypointassist.office.officelive.com

I will be purchasing my own domain name in a few days.

Thanks for your help!

I clicked the link but it is not working.

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Cathryn Branch, MPA 'We will either find a way, or make one.' Hannibal

Darn..Ok Let me try this again
www.mypointassist.services.officelive.com
orhttp://www.mypointassist.services.officelive.com

See if this works

Hi Marian,

Well done, looks fantastic!

I have a couple of suggestions....

Firstly, your 2nd heading on the left:

• Have more on your "To-Do" list than you can handle?

Looks like that bullet just before the heading is 'floating' by itself and might need deleting.

And your first couple of sentences after that may benefit from some rewording:

Always feel like there isn't enough hours in the day to do it all? The Real Estate Industry, small businesses, and entrepreneur's have many tasks in one given day just to keep your business afloat or for your transactions to keep on the closing calendar.

I suggest you replace 'isn't' with 'aren't'.
No need for the apostrophe between 'r' and 's' for 'entrepreneurs'.
Both instances of 'your' would work better as 'their', because you're talking about them, not to them.

Great work on getting all of your information ready to go!! My next stage is writing up my web content and posting it on my site....more research and preparation needed yet though!

Kirsty.

Thank you Kirsty for you advice. I'll change those things right now. I have been working long hours on this and getting cross-eyed in the process. I felt like I needed fresh eyes on it. I was right. Thank you again, you have been a great help!

Hiya! I liked your site; colors, photos in headmast with the boxes and the site pal avatar. The last one surprised me because I don't usually go for the talking right away.

I'm a little anal about centering so the only things I would mention is that I would prefer to see the logo and tagline centered on the green box and your contact information at the bottom in a larger font and more centered in all that white space.

Like I said, I'm a little anal about it and it is my preference only.

You did a good job with your site. Congrats on the accomplishment.

--JLR

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JL Robinson
www.JLRBusinessServices.com

Good job on your site and you've gotten some good feedback so far. I personally am not a fan of "talking" websites - I usually cringe at the moment I hear the music or speaking and immediately hit the mute button. I like the look of the girl, but just not the talking. But don't just take my word for it - maybe do some searches on trends in website design, best practices, etc

Take care!

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Kari Thevenot, Virtual Assistant
www.yourlefthand.net

Thanks you guys! I agree about the centering. I'm the same way. I could get it to look right with the logo I did up in Works paint. But I have a professional one on the way so that should help a little. Also I left space at the bottom to but the paypal logo on there. Thanks so much for all your feedback! You guys have been great!

Happy to help! Make sure you let us know when it's at the next stage

Hello Mi...sry but i think the link is not working :0(

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Gia S.