Hello everyone,
I just finished adding the missing pieces to my website. I think I'm now ready to get out there and start marketing my services and distributing my business cards.
I really do hope many of you will review my website and let me know what you think, what is lacking or needs improving, should be deleted....
thank you!
warm regards,
Debrah
www.allbusinessvirtualassistance.com:

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Deb

I'm getting an error message when I click on the link.

I was able to get to the website and I really liked it. There was a really nice picture in the top left corner with an orange border around the website. I thought the wording was very good. I clicked on the second page and the orange border was gone. It was a white page, but I did not read it because I clicked to another page to see if the border was there. That is when I got the error message. I could not go to another page without the error message. If you can get it working, I think it will be very good, because what I did see I thought was very clean and well organized. Good luck getting it working.

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Pam
www.adminetcetera.com

Great start. Got a few error pages as well. I like the fact that you have your rates listed. That's one thing I need to add to my site. It's such a bear building a web site but a very good feeling when it's done to be able to say "I did it."

Jenny

Hi Deb,
Congrats on your website. I used office live as well and love it. I like your colors and will review content in more detail to provide usefull feedback.

I know what a task it was to complete the website...I kept changing mine and still it is a work in progress. Check me out @ www.youradminplus.com

Tanya

Hello and thanks for your feedback,
I'm so glad for the input. I found creating this website was easy with Microsoft Office Live! I highly recommend it. I am looking into why those error pages show up.
Tanya, I really liked your website. I thought the variety of images and fonts made it pop. A really good example of how effective Office Live! is.

Debrah

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Deb

I think your site is great--not sure how savvy you are on web creation, but I see you built it from MS Office. I did mine via in ISP web space, and that was a way to learn about creating websites. Of course, as time goes on, you will most likely revise and revamp it. For the present, it's great!

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Dena Peters
http://www.denastoolsandtips.com

Hello,
you guessed it- this was my first website that I created. Thanks to all who have taken the time to look at it and reply. Maybe sooner rather than later I will try to jazz it up a bit here and there. For now I'm concerned that it covers all the really basic information a potential client would require.
Thanks again!


warm regards,
Debrah

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Deb

Deb, I have just checked your site.

I really like your content, especially your services page. But I would engage you visitor more on your home page.

I think you could do with using some more images.

Take a look at the SEO thread here, you will get some ideas on how to get your site working for you.

I also have a Microsoft Officelive site and I have taken out the "powered by ..." and the search link - you really do not want to have possible clients leaving you site until they have seen all that you can do.

You have made a great start, keep it up and you will have a great site.

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Vicky
www.c-vas.eu

Hello Vicky,
Great - thank you for taking the time to review my site. I'm taking notes and considering those terrific design ideas. The SEO stuff is brand new to me. However, I feel this first endeavor is also a huge learning curve.
thanks again!
warm regards,
Debrah

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