Working on completing my website, would appreciate your feedback.
http://www.vistaofficesolutions.com

Thanks so much.

Regards,

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Janet McIntosh
Vista Office Solutions

Very nice, Janet. I am excited that you are doing your website.Wish you much success.
Wendy

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http://www.anofcextension.com
Office support, Database Creation and Management, Internet Research

I like it! I looks good, did you use wordpress to build it?

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Christina Keogh
www.ckvirtualassistant.com

Ladies,

Thanks for taking the time to look at my site and for your responses as well.
Christina - Yes I did use Wordpress to build this site.

Thanks again.

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Janet McIntosh
Vista Office Solutions

I like your site... It's a very easy read and all of the information is easy to find.

Clean and easy to navigate. It's a really nice site, Janet

I did spot a few things that you might want to check out though:

• Home Page: "A virtual assistants are independent contractors" - plural and singular.
• Benefits page: "or addition utility bills." - should read "additional"
  
• Benefits page: "The relationship between you and your VA is based on a contracted agreement and you state the terms." Does this mean that the client has total say-so on how you will work together? I may be misinterpreting what you mean here; I have been staring at this laptop for too long today
• About page: "If you are looking for an experienced professional assistant to take care of those time consuming tasks." Should there be more text here as the sentence feels incomplete as-is?
• About page: In the paragraphs you go from WE to I. It felt inconsistent.
• About page: "I love working in an administrative role, however, I realized in order to fulfill the passion I feel about what I do, is to create my own path." An easy fix but the sentence doesn't quite make sense as-is.

I think that was everything. I truly hope my comments doesn't discourage you as I know that it's so hard to catch everything when you are putting it all together for a website. Staring at the screen all-day can really play around with your eyes.

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Linda
Clockwise Virtual Assistance

Looks good, however:

You should change your page titles to include keywords: http:// vistaofficesolutions.com/?page_id=5 should be http:// vistaofficesolutions.com/services. You can change this in the setting on the WP dashboard.

Add some bolding or change colors on your key benefits: Providing efficient, reliable and accurate support as a virtual executive assistant, allowing them more time to focus on their clients while growing their businesses. This will help for the skimmers.

You may want to change the "what is a VA" section to be more client driven benefits. Most people already know what we do but the key is to tell them why they need it. I would also take out the line about supporting multiple clients. Even though we do this, every business owner want to feel like you are giving them the time that they need.

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Lee Drozak
My Office Assistant

Linda and Lee thanks so much for the constructive feedback on my site. Very useful, will update information.

Thanks again.

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Janet McIntosh
Vista Office Solutions

Janet, your site is very nice. The colors are good, nice spacing and it is easy to read. You have been given some very good critique above. I noticed one small typo I don't believe anyone else mentioned. At the bottom of your services page the word 'list' is left out of: A complete of services is available upon request.
Once these corrections are made, it will look very nice.
Mary
www.MyVirtualMarketingCenter.c om

I like it, very straight foward.

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Karla Amaya, Your Practical Admin
http://www.yourpracticaladmin.com