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#1 (permalink)   11-28-2007 Virtual Office Guru Contributing Member Company name: The Virtual Office Guru   Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Wisconsin Posts: 176 Website Review Please! I have my temporary site up until I figure out my niche with the website making and what I want my logo to be. If you want to take a look at it and give me any advice as to things I can change or things I need to add, I would really appreciate it. Thanks for all your input and advice. Next week, I think I'm going to host it myself and get all the godaddy sponsored ads off of website. I just want to make sure of a couple of things first though. Thanks again! __________________ Shay Jordan-The Virtual Office Guru Virtually, the best way to do business

#2 (permalink)   11-28-2007 BwellBusinessServices Contributing Member   Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Delaware Posts: 213 Re: Website Review Please! Shay - at a quick glance these are some of things I thought you may change. Home We (instead of You) focus on your business and its profitability while we focus on the behind the scenes administrative work Capitalize the "i" It gives you more time for leisure activities with friends and family Services If (replaces the word "It") there is something that we don't provide (changed the word "do"), we can refer you to someone who can assist you. __________________ Be Well, Carla www.bwellbusinessservices.com virtually meeting your needs

#3 (permalink)   11-28-2007 Tess Senior Member Company name: Codehead, LLP Latest blog post: SEO Q&A   Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 8,935 Blog Entries: 3 Re: Website Review Please! Shay, not sure why but your links in the menu are not static. When I click 'Services' the button that was 'Services' changes to 'Contact Us' etc. This is confusing for your visitors, not to mention a nightmare for search engines - I'd suggest a completely static menu - when I click a tab it should still be the same thing I clicked last time And maybe a bit of color in the way of photos would help add more energy to the site. Your text is *very* sparse. Remember, you're a business; granted, a small biz, but still - a business has plenty of information for it's potential customers to browse through to get a good idea of company philosophy, experience, services, etc. Is there anywhere you can add more information to the site? Maybe give more info about yourself, elaborate on your services a bit, or detail your experience? __________________ Stuck in startup? Stop dreaming. Start DOING! Get the Become a Virtual Assistant eBook for just $29

#4 (permalink)   11-28-2007 Virtual Office Guru Contributing Member Company name: The Virtual Office Guru   Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Wisconsin Posts: 176 Re: Website Review Please! Thanks for the advice Tess. I'll change those things when I get home from work tonight and I'll add more information about my services and my experience. Thank you! __________________ Shay Jordan-The Virtual Office Guru Virtually, the best way to do business

#5 (permalink)   12-01-2007 Tess Senior Member Company name: Codehead, LLP Latest blog post: SEO Q&A   Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 8,935 Blog Entries: 3 Re: Website Review Please! Most welcome! How are the updates coming along? __________________ Stuck in startup? Stop dreaming. Start DOING! Get the Become a Virtual Assistant eBook for just $29