I think it's really fresh, fun and shows a lot of personality - a must if you want to stand out in this business.

I see that you took some of Janine's advice, but in the first bullet point I'd still change "that" to "who". Also, I would just say "new software" not "a new software" and on your Services page, the last one under project work is "Create custom logo design to help brand your business" - You really should use Create or Design, but not both.

Overall, I'd say you did a great job! I also "liked" your fan page while I was there.

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April Sullivan
The REVA Academy

I am loving this! lol Okay, I changed the few words that you had suggested. Its so great to get others opinions I appreciate it!

Originally Posted by khoward15

Did you have to pay for this site or did you find a free site to build it. Please let me know. Thanks.

It is built using Intuit's SiteBuilder, Homestead, with (I think) her custom images added.

Shannon, I would run your site through the W3C Markup Validation Service. There are quite a few errors and some warnings in the code that should be corrected.

Overall nice job though, Shannon - love your color scheme!

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Jules, SunRise Virtual Solutions - WordPress Customization & XHTML/CSS Web Sites

Nice job on your site. I like that it is different than most.

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Amy
www.porterofficesolutions.com

Originally Posted by Business-Bytes

It is built using Intuit's SiteBuilder, Homestead, with (I think) her custom images added. Shannon, I would run your site through the W3C Markup Validation Service. There are quite a few errors and some warnings in the code that should be corrected. Overall nice job though, Shannon - love your color scheme!

yes, I actually did start running my site through some of my programs...i have some of my seo that I am currrently still working on. Then I need to figure out why a couple of my backround seo is "in the wrong spot"

Hi Shannon:
I agree that your site design is unique. It's also easy to navigate and I like the color scheme.

I noticed a a few grammatical errors you may want to address (I didn't go through the entire site, but here are some I noticed right off. I would suggest having a friend or colleague go through the text with a fine-tooth comb so grammar isn't in the way of leaving a stellar impression with potential clients):

About Me:
...Working for the local Board of REALTORS® for 6 years as their MLS Administrator has helped me understand what you and your business need through many years of providing technical support for Real Estate Agents.

1. delete "has"
2. businesses need or business needs
3. I would delete "through many years..." it's redundant to first clause.
4. Also, in the world of Copyright marks, it's only necessary to use it once per page and not necessary to clutte

r text with the mark every time it's used.

Many words are treated as pronouns when they technically aren't. Is that by design or simply an oversight, e.g., I grew up with my Father owning multiple Real Estate companies,
correct grammar is: Father (no my) or my father; real estate; etc.

...My business success directly depends on you success. should be "your"
...All information will be kept confidential between you and I at all times. correct grammar is you and me.
...when billed, or you may request.. the comma is not needed.

I have never seen the calendar planner on your "Contact me" page. I'd like to consider putting it on my site. Would love to learn about how to get more information about it.

Getting the website done is such a huge step. So Well Done You! Now the tricky part, getting clients there.

Take care,
Trish

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Trish Hallmark
www.thvaonline.com

Shannon, I love your site! The colors really make me want to see what your company is about. Great job Lady!

Lynn

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Lynn Mallory
AM/PM Virtual Office Assistants, LLC

Excellent job! It's keep my interest but is also professional and gives me all the information I'd need.