My website is finally complete...i'm nervous to post but let me know what you think! I designed all logos and site.

www.SksVa.com

Thanks!!

Dear Shannon,

I like your colors very much!

I like that you have used a good portion of the 'above the fold' area to ask questions; prompting agents to think about their workload.

My own personal preference is not to use contractions in business writing. So I am not a fan of "don't" and "doesn't".

I would suggest that you change some of the questions:

* Are you a busy Real Estate Professional that [who] doesn't [does not] have enough time in the day [to do what, Shannon]? To service clients, to meet with clients, to follow up with leads? I'd be specific.


* [Do you] Need a new website design to set yourself apart from the competition [?] Make it one statement and not two thoughts. [Do you need your website maintained] or website maintenance so you're [you are] always up-to-date & [and] a step above [your] competitors?


* Have you recently purchased a new real estate software,

but don't[do not] have the time to learn how to use it?

Then the next paragraph summarize and tie in with the above noting the varying benefits, i.e., training, more time with clients, someone to follow up with leads.

Very nice overall!

Janine

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Thanks for the tips....it is always great to get another persons opinion. I see what you mean and have updated my site a bit. Again, thanks I appreciate it!

Wow! Your site is really nice, great job!. I wish my site looked as good as yours. Did you have to pay for this site or did you find a free site to build it. Please let me know.

I really appreciate you letting us see your site. It's really good!

Thanks.

Your site is very easy on the eyes and well put together. You did a great job.

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Thanks! I am only paying $5 a month through intuit websites. But I designed and built the website myself through there program..I did not use a template...glad you guys like it!

I don't personally have a problem, but it could be a complaint of some customers that with the color in the background the text would be difficult to read. I know when I'm building websites I tend to use a solid color, or something that isn't to busy. It keeps it simple and is easier on the eyes for those that have slightly poor eye sight. Otherwise it looks great .

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Very nice Sharon. Love the colours, but agree with Amanda the busy background may be a challenge for some folk. I like your choice of menu button styles and font, it lends a touch of "approachability" that is carried through in your way with words.

Wow you have an amazing talent!!!! You should be really proud of yourself!

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Okay, I see what you mean...my computer screen made it seem like it was lighter....I changed the backround...I kept the same backround but made it lighter. Please let me know if you think it is easier to read.

Thank you for the compliments on my site!