Hi Crystal,
I just love the name of your business, and your tagline is a natural. Good job!
Your site looks good, navigation is clear, colors are nice and not distracting, text is easy to read, and the writing style is clear and readable.
I did expect to be able to click on the list of services to the right on your homepage, probably because they look like links to me. See if anyone else thinks the same thing, because it might just be a personal thing. If others think it's a problem, maybe you could just add a header row below the graphic that says something like "Offering" or "Services Offered."
Getting traffic is a whole other matter. For that check out the threads in Marketing and Networking. I know there has also been some discussion about the pros and cons of listing rates on your site. My opinion from a consumer standpoint is that I want to see your rates. Then I know if I am wasting my time and yours by inquiring further. Others have differing opinions. I say go with your instinct. It's your site and your business, and you know it best.
The only only other thing that struck me is your domain name, and I debated about mentioning it, because there is nothing you can do about it now. I decided though, that maybe other people would benefit. The thing is, when I read your domain name, I read it as Crystal Clear BS, and that's probably not exactly the message you are trying to send.
I hope this doesn't come off as picking on you. I'm only pointing it out because it's something people don't think about when choosing a domain name, and there are some truly disastrous domain names out there (
www.whorepresents.com comes to mind), so it pays to be careful.
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