I would appreciate any feedback you can give. We're still working on a few things like SEO, but I'd say it's 99% there.

www.kathycrofoot.com

Thank you!

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Kathy Crofoot
http://www.kathycrofoot.com

Hi there,

Congratulations on your website. It is very clean looking and easy to read and naviagte which is very important. I didn't read all the content on the site but 1 thing did pop out to me on the Home Page:

A Virtual Assistant Provides you the Freedom to Pursue your Vision.

and

Partnering with a skilled Virtual Assistant Provides the Freedom to Pursue your Vision.

First of all they are too similar and need to be different and I wouldn't put Virtual Assistant(s) in the headings and subheadings etc. You should be saying why you and/or your business provides freedom and what you will do for them. Make the reader feel like you are personal resolving their issues before they even talk to you. Tell them how you will resolve their problems and what makes you different etc.

I like the detail and the clean look of the site.

Congrats

I really like your site. And I absolutely love the logo. Brianna does awesome work. I agree with Serena though about the repetitiveness of that phrase on your front page. I also really like the graphic on the bookeeping page. Was that done with Wordle?

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Kimberly
Facebook Marketing Magic!

Kathy -

I really like the design/layout of your site. It's neat and crisp


looks good

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Kena~
Everyone smiles in the same language

You had a wonderful web site. I agree with you, Brianna did a lovely job on your logo and the story to go with it is very touching.


Good luck with the business.

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Vicky
www.c-vas.eu

Your site looks great! Good luck!

Lori

Thank you all for your feedback. The phrase mentioned is also my tagline, and I'm using it to reinforce my point.

The Graphic on the Bookkeeping page is a Wordle.

Brianna is the best! We're still working on a few things, but she's done a fabulous job.

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Kathy Crofoot
http://www.kathycrofoot.com

Very clean and neat! I like it very much. Way to go.

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Tonya (aka "T")
Speed-E-Skills