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Old 01-02-2011
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Hi Everyone.

I am in the process of learning how to create a website and all that goes along with it. I am having a tough time with it and will be trying to get our new site up in the next couple of weeks. Until then, I created a quick website in Microsoft Office Live and was hoping for some feedback. It is a work in progress and any suggestions would be welcome.

http://trinityvas.web.officelive.com/default.aspx

Thank you for your help!
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Old 01-03-2011
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Good work, the site is simple, clean and easy to browse but make sure to use as much as space as u can, don't leave white space much, rather you can make your images bigger and add some more content's as well.

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Old 01-03-2011
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I like your website, it' s easy to navigate. just make your contacts on the HOME page a little smaller, so that it won't look crowded. and there be spaces for "Why use a Virtual Assistant?" part. I like the pictures that you used and the font on your banner. Can I know what font is that? Hope I helped you!

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Thank you guys for your feedback. This has been a heck of a project. Obviously need to take a class if I ever want to get better or help anyone else. LOL...

Cheenee, the font is "Spring". Hope that helps.
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Old 01-03-2011
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Hi Terri,

I like your website! I agree with YWSO about the simplicity and it is very easy to navigate. I kinda chuckled at the Ducks in a row. Will you be doing your own hosting? Or will you be hosting through somebody? Over all, you did a great job for a temporary website.
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Old 01-04-2011
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I like it. It's fairly clean and neat and I like that. I like your colors and fonts as well. Very pleasing to look at.

I caught a couple of typo's:
-About us page 'Julie Payne ~ Julie bring' should be 'brings'
-About us page 'Terry has background' should 'Terry has a background'

Looks good over all!
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Old 01-06-2011
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I want to give you a great resource for creating your site. www.Weebly.com. Weebly offers free hosting, they have a variety of different templates for your site, everything is customizable and it is SO user-friendly. Everything is "drag and drop." Good luck!
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Old 01-06-2011
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I also thought this was great. I did notice the typos mentioned by Rhonda -- isn't it great to have the extra eyes here to catch things? I actually really loved your site. I like that you are partnered with someone. The fact that you offer 60+ years of experience is HUGE!! I am impressed.
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I like your website, nice and clean and clear.

I wondered whether you should have a paragraph about Trinity on the home page. Just a welcoming paragraph about Trinity and what Trinity can offer a client. At the moment you have a lot of information on what a VA is and the benefits of working with a VA but nothing about you and why a client should work with you in particular. You obviously have a lot of strengths and experience so maybe shouting about them on the home page so it is the first thing people read would be good.
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Thank you Patty & Nicola. Great feedback. Will make corrections today and yes, a blurb about working with Trinity. So glad to be able to have the feedback from all of you!
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