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Old 12-01-2007
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Default Spell check please!! My eyes are going batty!
If someone wouldnt mind could you please check out my site and make sure I'm spelling everything right, my eyes have gone batty since 7am this morning LOL and yes I did you spellcheck but would still appreciate some additional eyes

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Old 12-01-2007
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Default Re: Spell check please!! My eyes are going batty!
I am going to give it a shot here too and I have sleepy eyes too!

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With the internet what it is today a Virtual Assistant can work for anyone in any location.
Comma in here somewhere after today??

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Wondering how a VA works, its really very simple.
it's

2nd page

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. I have worked in several different types of business’s including an accounting office for small business and restaurants, a telecommunications company, convenience store offices and dental offices
businesses right??

third page

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Don't see what your looking for?
you are, you're

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Accouts Receivable and Collections
ACCOUNTS missing the N

Rates page

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*Items requiring a "Rush" or 24hour turnaround will also incur addional charges
Easier correction method LOL additional

Contact page

Gem's Office Hours:
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Our office hours are generally Monday-Friday from 9:00am to 4:pm EST.
4:00

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For those living in other area's of the country please contact us for additional arrangements if needed!
areas maybe, doesn't sound right
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Old 12-01-2007
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Default Re: Spell check please!! My eyes are going batty!
OK let's see I don't know if I can go through all the pages but I'll start with the home page and about - plus it looks you like you got some good feedback here! (the new site looks good by the way! ) :

[FONT='Trebuchet MS', 'Lucida Grande', sans-serif]Welcome to Gem’s Virtual Office [/FONT]where you’ll work with your own personal Virtual Assistant dedicated to helping your business shine. Gem's specializes in assisting small businesses, dental practices, and individuals requiring administrative, bookkeeping and office management support.
Now you're probably asking yourself "What is a Virtual Assistant?"

Well a (DELETE) A Virtual Assistant is an independent office assistant [that] who works from their own home office. Your invisible right hand dedicated to assisting you in building and managing your business. With the internet what it is today, a Virtual Assistant can work for anyone in any location. If you'd like to read other definitions of a Virtual Assistant please go to the resources page.

Wondering how a VA works, its (DELETE) The way a Virtual Assistant operates is really very simple. They (DELETE) Virtual Assistants work via email, over the phone, fax, remote access and other internet based technology, and all from their home office. You many never meet your VA personally, unless you are a local office, but you can be assured they will be there for you when you need them!

There are many benefits to working with a VA. Here are a few examples:

No employee payroll, benefits or vacation time to pay for
No office space or equipment needed. We have our own!
You pay your VA for only the actual hours worked, no more paying for idle hours and coffee breaks!
Your VA may even be available outside of regular office hours, we are here for you!

Still not sure? Take a look at this cost comparison chart that shows why working with a Virtual Assistant will save you money today, and then take a look at the services (LINK TO SERVICES PAGE) that Gem offers to see how we can help you.

Contact Gem with any and all inquires and be sure to visit my blog to find out more about me!

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In your menu - you have 'VA Resourses' it should be VA Resources (thanks for the link )

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[FONT='Trebuchet MS', 'Lucida Grande', sans-serif]Hi, my name is Deborah Frawley.I am the owner of Gem’s Virtual Office and your Virtual Assistant. I’m a single mom to two great teenagers. We live in Williamson, New York which is located on Lake Ontario in western New York. The town, which is located in the middle of apple country, is easily accessible to both Rochester and Syracuse.

"Gem" is a nickname I was given years ago from a former co-worker, who considered me a "Gem of a friend, co-worker and person." I would also like to be known as a Gem in the world of Virtual Assisting. I believe that personality as well as trust is very important when working with others. Your privacy is also very important to me and you can rest assured that any information we share will stay strictly within this office.

Over the past 20 years I have been an Office Manager, Bookkeeper, Administrative Assistant and a Customer Service Representative. I have worked in several different types of businesss including an accounting office for small business and restaurants, a telecommunications company, convenience store offices and dental offices. I enjoy and excel in all aspects of managing a small business office.

I hold an AAS in Business and Office Management and constantly continue to improve on my education and skills with online training courses and continuing education. I have worked with QuickBooks for the past 15 years and I'm proud to say I am a QuickBooks Certified User. I consider myself a quick study, an independent worker, great multi-tasker and I absolutely love a challenge.
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Default Re: Spell check please!! My eyes are going batty!
Thanks Dawn and Tess I'll make the changes later today
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