Thanks Sandy, I appreciate your feedback!

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April Sullivan
The REVA Academy

Very clean and professional looking site. I like the colors and the chick logo too. Great job!

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Perfect Balance Virtual Services

Your website looks great. Very refreshing and nicely organized. Love the blue color! The little chick graphic is very cute. Really nicely done. Bravo May I ask if you created the website yourself and with what software?

Take care,

Rachel

April,

I just looked at your website again and I'm wondering, is that your home office address on your contact page. I will have my office at my home too and am wondering if I should put my home address on there. I've heard some say they dont' use their home address and that they have a PO box for business. I'm wondering, since I don't have a PO Box, should I be putting my home address on my website, business cards, marketing materials, etc.?

Thank you.

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Sandy

Sandy, that is actually the address of my husband's mortgage and real estate office. You should never put your home address on your website.

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April Sullivan
The REVA Academy

Perfect - thanks for the quick response April.

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Sandy

Hi I like your page...the only thing I would change is the services page. I also want to add that your packages are good - I really never saw that listed on a virtual admin assistants page and I have to say I do like it.

Hi, I love your site; would you mind telling me what font you've used for the main body of text?

Hi April,

I love the look of your site! Very clean and pleasing to the eye. As far as the copy goes, there are a few things that I noticed and thought were worth mentioning, since you asked for constructive criticism and all.

One thing is the newsletter sign-up request. It might help to get a bit more specific about what readers stand to gain from receiving your newsletter each month. Will they learn tips and techniques that will help them sell more houses? Shave ten hours of busywork off their schedule each week? Might help to add some specifics into the copy under the sign-up form and then change the headline a bit to be more attention-grabbing. Instead of "Monthly tips" maybe it would be "Money-making tips" or "Time-saving tips," whatever it is that is related to your monthly newsletter and will grab the attention of your target market and make them enter their name and email address. Would also help to have some sort of giveaway, like a free report or free downloadable audio that reveals a time-saving or money-making secret or two, that they will get instantly once they sign up.

PS: I'm glad to hear that you're starting to find success with your website!

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