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Old 07-01-2010
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Company name: A Plus Admin Services
 
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I finally have my site up and running with a few more tweeks and additions that need to be completed.

When you all get a moment can you all check out my site? I would love to hear what you think? It's been about 6 yrs since I updated my site and I'm so looking forward to it being completed. I'm having a time with the home page and need to update/add a few pages

http://www.aplusadminservices.com

THANKS!

Leona
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Old 07-01-2010
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Company name: Virtually Anywhere Administration
 
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I really love the look of your page! I think the general look is very professionally done, and has a great impact when you first open it.

On the links page, the links don't line up, and don't seem to link to anything. Also there is a blank white box at the bottom. In your "About" I found the second paragraph a little akward. My suggestion for wording would be:
"A Plus Admin's clientele ranges from; real estate, cow management, Mary Kay, Professional Organizer, translating book company, and personal finances/management. Some of our clients included a local non-profit organization and designing wedding albums.

And I think "enewsletter" should be e-newsletter.
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Old 07-05-2010
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Hi, Leona
I would strongly recommend taking out the paragraph on the home page that warns that a 'few pages are still under construction' - that's going to send potential clients elsewhere right off the bat.

Better to complete it as best you can and continue to work on it when you are able without that statement on the site. People visiting your site don't know if it's finished or not, so why waste that valuable real estate on your page with an 'excuse' about the site - better to use it to grab the attention of your visitor and give them reason to click further into the site to learn more about you.

I will say I did find a few grammar issues so you might want to revisit your content.

Please feel free to post back when the site is done so we can take another look
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Hi Leona,

Leona, the site has a very professional feel to it. I agree with Tess on removing the paragraph about the site being under construction. Also, remove the statement about the Facebook page not working properly. Just add the Facebook icon when it is ready.

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Old 07-12-2010
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I've only had a quick peek but its a really nice, well laid out site. Crisp & clean.
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1. Congrats on completion of your website.

2. The site is crisp, clean and professional. Maybe a logo would help make it more professional.
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