Finally, I have a website done. I did it through microsoft live office so not many options. I'm going for simple, but interesting. Let me know if anything is missing or consider putting on it. Thanks!

Your link leads to http://yourvapro.com/

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Lee Drozak
My Office Assistant

Hehe, I was really confused for a second! Let us know the correct link Eager to see what you came up with.

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Sorry, had to change it from accidentally putting in the wrong one before.

Here is my 2 cents hope it is helpful...

My first questions is are you only catering to artists? If not then businesses who are not may not think you are interested in helping them.

Your text should either be justified or left justified. Center text is difficult to read in large quantities.

You should hyperlink your email on the contact page

It is a great start but you may want to add more content to your pages.

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Lee Drozak
My Office Assistant

Thanks for your input,
yes, I am catering to artists since they are my target audience. But maybe I'm misunderstanding target audience. Can I have a target audience while serving other business types? Would I get more responses if I make it avail to all businesses vs just artists, then narrow it down later?

nevermind, i found the answer to my question in the appropriate forum

you might be working on it at the moment so maybe that's why (?), but it's not opening up for me. just fyi.

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shana
www.shanafore.com

Becky, how do you like officelive so far? Isn't it great that you can run visitor reports and update it as often as you'd like? I have been very happy with mine (www.professional-business-services.com) and it was so simple to create, without having prior website development knowlegement.

Hello Becky,

Your website looks great. Love the colors. Very clean looking.

Other than what the other posters said above, I wanted to point out a few more things on your website that you might want to be aware of:

*On the home page, the next to the last sentence... completly should be completely
*On your services page, coorespondence should be correspondence
*On your blog page, March 11...Next to the last sentence, I think you meant whether, instead of weather

Hope this helps. All in all I think you did a great job.

Dana