So after my host disabled virtually every option I needed, my original site now looks horrible. SO, I am porting to a new host and have built the new site, which looks so much better. It won't launch til sometime around the end of the month so I wanted to get everyone's pre-launch opinions so I can tweak it before launch. I would greatly appreciate your comments!

You can find it here.

Thanks everyone! Looking forward to your insight!

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Winston Stewart
PennWin Administrative Services

Honestly I like this one better! It looks great. I would go ahead and list your Terms/Conditions Policy and link it to your "Additional Terms and Conditions May Apply" Take a look at mine here and see if that helps you get started on your T&C Policy.

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Action Jackson Virtual Assistant|

Originally Posted by Action Jackson VA

Honestly I like this one better! It looks great. I would go ahead and list your Terms/Conditions Policy and link it to your "Additional Terms and Conditions May Apply" Take a look at mine here and see if that helps you get started on your T&C Policy.

Thanks! I really haven't gotten that far yet...lol. I've been working on the T&C, and they should be uploaded tomorrow. The problem is I am so picky and OCD about my wording that its driving me crazy, lol.

My original site was similar to this one until they disabled all of their features.:mad5: So I had to build a quick retainer site on Google until this one was finished. Now I'm just adding the finishing touches before launch at the end of this month.


Thanks for your input!

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Winston Stewart
PennWin Administrative Services

Winston,

I looked at your site and I loved the colors, blue is my favorite color too. Nice and clean looking.

I don't feel qualified to critique anyone's site since mine is just ok but since you asked

...I am sending you PM now.

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JoCarole
http://www.shoreofficeservices.com

Boy, I have got to say that I like this a whole lot better than your other site that had all the problems!

One thing that I noticed while reading through the pages, is that on the Services page and Additional Services there is a typo here: *We do not offer Travel Agen Services (think ya want to add a 't' after 'Agen'). Other than that, I love the way you word things!! Way :cool:

Have you tried doing your logo in say capital S-M and then only the first letter capitalized in Office Solutions? Looks fine as-is, but just wondering about that.

Keep on rockin', Winston! You're coming along nicely!

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Jules, SunRise Virtual Solutions - WordPress Customization & XHTML/CSS Web Sites

See, this is why I wanted everyone to look at it before it launches....i.e. typos, lol. Thanks everyone for your input!

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Winston Stewart
PennWin Administrative Services

Originally Posted by Stewartwin

See, this is why I wanted everyone to look at it before it launches....i.e. typos, lol. Thanks everyone for your input!

Sometimes it helps not to look at something for a short time and come back to it with "fresh" eyes. Or even proof it going line by line. I've found many very strange typos that way.

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Jules, SunRise Virtual Solutions - WordPress Customization & XHTML/CSS Web Sites

Ok...so the typos have been corrected as well as some spacing issues. I hope to have the new T&C page up tomorrow, no later than Wednesday. I also changed the colors of my blog to be more "eye-friendly", lol. Please let me know what you think! :ears:

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Winston Stewart
PennWin Administrative Services

Originally Posted by Business-Bytes

Boy, I have got to say that I like this a whole lot better than your other site that had all the problems! One thing that I noticed while reading through the pages, is that on the Services page and Additional Services there is a typo here: *We do not offer Travel Agen Services (think ya want to add a 't' after 'Agen'). Other than that, I love the way you word things!! Way :cool: Have you tried doing your logo in say capital S-M and then only the first letter capitalized in Office Solutions? Looks fine as-is, but just wondering about that. Keep on rockin', Winston! You're coming along nicely!

The original logo was exactly like you mentioned but to me, it just didn't look right. So I presented to a few others and the general consensus was that it looked better in all caps.

Thanks again for your input!

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Winston Stewart
PennWin Administrative Services

I got my Terms & Conditions page finished on my website!

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Winston Stewart
PennWin Administrative Services