My NEW website is done. Please keep in mind, it has VA services sprinkled here and there, since I can assist office locally as needed. Please take a look and give me your feedback.

www.TheDoctorsRx.com

Brianna Young with the Mad Hatter Design Company was the person I chose to create my webpage. If you like what she's done for me (and others), please tell her Robin with The Doctor's Rx referred you. She was able to work with an existing logo I had and I appreciated that. At this time I didn't want to change the logo due to my budget. I would highly recommend Brianna! She was wonderful to work with. If you have any questions about what we did, please PM me.

Thank you for your comments and feedback! Enjoy your day!

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The Doctor's Rx
"The Doctor's Prescription for Success"

Home page:

"Staff are already overwhelmed with daily tasks and don't look forward to taking on more projects you may need done."

"...or publishing an office newsletter."

"...capability.[add space]We also assist offices with the integration of becoming paperlessr [remove the 'r'] and chartless."

"Our role is to serve as an extension of your TEAM by supporting you in identifying areas that will [remove will] we can assist you."

What We Do page:

"As an experienced partner in your practice, we will guide, motivate, and assist you to reach your goals and by [either change 'and' to 'by' or take out 'ing' in completing] completing your TEAM!

"Below is a brief listing of services we can provide. If you have a need or concern with an area of your practice that's [remove 's] needs improvement, let us know, and we'll see [remove 'see'] show you how we can assist you."

"We'll review the office systems you currently have in place and coordinate what [remove 'what'] the implementation of systems you may need or upon which you can improve upon [remove 'upon']."

About The Dr's Rx Page:

"Robin Besotes is the founder of The Doctor's Rx and dentistry's Virtual Assistant."

"She [take out 'she'] Robin loves "coming in" and cleaning up areas that have been neglected or put on the back burner with staff not having enough dedicated time to get the task done while working with patients."

"Robin Besotes is the go-to person for solutions and ideas!"

Gee - does this also qualify as proof of my editing skills?

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Lily Chambers, The Virtual Office Goddess, LLC
Author "How to Do Your Own Small Business Bookkeeping"

Lily - this is great! I got an email from Brianna about something else and thought the "paperless" and the extra space on the period had been taken care of. My fault. I didn't look (and should have), since I wasn't planning on posting my webpage review until the little things I caught were taken care of.

PS: I too originally had my last name removed, so that was me....

Are you interested in my editing, writing, etc. post?

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The Doctor's Rx
"The Doctor's Prescription for Success"

Originally Posted by Robin

Are you interested in my editing, writing, etc. post?

I am - I sent you a PM and an additional sample of my editing/formatting work for your review.

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Lily Chambers, The Virtual Office Goddess, LLC
Author "How to Do Your Own Small Business Bookkeeping"

Looks like Lily is a bit faster than I am. Congratulations!!

I liked the website. And I also like your logo. I'm glad you were able to incorporate it into your new web page. Great niche, by the way.

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Pam
www.adminetcetera.com

Thanks Pam! I'll take a look at your info too. I've had three people contact me. It will be great to be able to have a couple VA's to work with. Haven't had a chance to review everything that's been sent to me so far, but I'm sure each person has a different and unique quality to bring to the table.

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The Doctor's Rx
"The Doctor's Prescription for Success"

Thanks, Robin. I'm sure you will find the right fit. There are many talented VAs here on the forum. Good luck.

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Pam
www.adminetcetera.com

Robin:

Here are my thoughts, (tried not to duplicate Lily)

Home page:
I would change this sentence from: "Staff are already overwhelmed with daily tasks and don't look forward to taking on more projects you may need." to "Your staff is already overwhelmed with daily tasks and they don't look forward to taking on more projects you may need (add done-as Lily suggested)."

What We Do page:
"As an experienced partner in your practice, we will guide, motivate, and assist you to reach your goals and completing your TEAM!" to "As an experienced partner in your practice, we will guide, motivate, and assist you in reaching your goals and completing your TEAM!"

"If you have a (need or-remove) concern with an area of your practice that's needs improvement, let us know, and we'll see how we can assist you."

Report Set-upOffice Working Manual-(I think this is supposed to be 2 different bullets)

I would re-word the sentence from "We will determine the areas you are in need and can assist you with staff motivation ideas to improve office moral." to "We will determine the areas where you are in need of improvement and can assist you with staff motivation ideas to improve office morale."

About us page:
Over the past 20 years Robin has assisted various clients with the (delete ir) administrative workings of a dental practice.

Resources page:
Our List of Tools, Links, Resources and Articles are(change to is) being compiled and will be posted soon.

Overall you website looks awesome!

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Kathy
www.theofficevirtuoso.com

Congrats on the new site Robin
Brianna does great work, to be sure and this site is no exception - very cute!
I remember when you posted the RFP for this and I was struck by how 'neat' the stethescope image is - I love that you were able to use that in this site as well!

I probably sound like a broken record but don't forget your SEO

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Cute site, Robin! Very neat and unique

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Kena~
Everyone smiles in the same language