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Old 01-08-2009
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Hello!

Please review my site. Let me know the good, the bad and the ugly.

http://onlineadmin.net/

Thanks,
Beth
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Very nice straight forward to the point and very professional
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I really like your site. Clean, clear, and to the point.

Good job!

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Hi Beth

I like your website. It's clear and very easy to navigate and understand. However, two things I noticed:

1. I think your Mission Statement is a little long. You have it as one sentence. I think I would break it up into two or maybe even three shorter sentences.

2. I love that you have the cost comparison in there. A great idea. But because it's in a different font to the rest of your website, it looks as though it's just been copied and pasted there. It looks a little unprofessional. I'm not sure how you can get around this, but to me, it just doesn't sit well with the rest of the website.

Just my opinions; hope they are helpful.
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The good---very professional looking.
The bad--on About page, last paragraph, last sentence needs fixed. On Service page, a couple of items aren't lined up with others. Oh, and on the About page, you might put a line between your Mission Statement and Welcome message.
The ugly--nothing ugly on this web site. The design and overall appearance is clean and concise.

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Thanks for the input. I will go in and try and fix the mission statement, font on the cost comparison, spacing and alignment. My site is in Wordpress and I am still learning how to use it plus if something is coded in HTML like the cost comparison I still don't know how to fix it yet. I'll give it a try!

Thanks again I appreciate y'all!
Beth
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Old 01-09-2009
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I like the overall look. Good job!

You have two different prices, though. One is in the cost comparison, and the other is in your rates. Did you mean for those to be different?

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I think your website looks very clean and professional. Kodos to you.
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Thanks for all the feedback! I made what changes I could. I haven't learned HTML code yet. On my services page I can't figure out how to get the headings lined up. Any suggestions will be appreciated.

Thanks again! Love this place!
Beth
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You seem to be using a template from Online Services. On the top navigation under "Services" it links back to the other site, (http://onlineadmin.net/services) not yours. All the text shows up in yellow and looks visibly different than the rest of your site.
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Hi Liz,

I am trying to fix the services page now. Just not real good with WordPress.

Thanks!
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You'll want to check that your font is the same across all pages - the home page font/size is different than the 'What is a VA' page font as well as the 'Cost Comparison' page. Also as mentioned the 'Services' page text is in yellow so I can't even read it on my screen.
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I like your graphic at the top of the page.
Is there a particular reason you didn't include any contact information (i.e. phone number or at least e-mail address)? I saw you had the form to fill in, but I would think you would want to have a way that someone can get a hold of you without filling that in.
But other than that, it looks good!
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Beth,

It looks good, the others have already mentioned any little things I saw that need tweaking.

Heather
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Old 01-13-2009
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Thanks! I am trying to fix the issues. I am not good at all with WordPress so the going is slow. I tried to add bullets to the list on the home page and everything moved to the right side of the page. Does anyone want to take a stab at it? I would appreciate any help. :
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