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Old 02-09-2010
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Arrow Please review my website - thank you!

Team,

I built my website a long time ago. As stated in my member intro, I've not really pushed my VA service for the past 2 years. I'm ready to jump back into it full time but want to know how I can boost my web page to make it more appealing...

BTW, I LOVE the calculator!! It adds a great touch to my site!!

http://www.paradisesecretarial.com
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Default Re: Please review my website - thank you!

I did not go past your home page, but can tell you that neither will your PCs.
It is text heavy but with such tiny font - too hard to read!

I don't believe business sites are a place for Google or affiliate ads, unless you have a Resources section where you can share these kinds of things, but even then my preference is not to see them at all.

I think pink can work to your advantage, it's not a commonly used color - but I'd suggest creating a strong logo with some darker colors as well so that you can work in some contrast and better balance the overall look of the site.

The menu is a bit hard to read, with the smaller white font - I'd recommend beefing that up a bit as well - again a darker font might be helpful.

But mainly the issue is I get to your home page and have no idea what you do. I'm faced with a lengthy disclaimer [why is that necessary?] and nothing more - aside from the ads at the bottom. I'd recommend creating some targeted content to help your visitors understand who you are, what you do, and how you can assist them.

Looking forward to seeing what you do with it!
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