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Old 05-01-2009
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I just finished my website, please let me know what you think. And please be honest.....I can take it!!!! I had a hard time with the Rates page...just couldn't come up with the right wording. I'm sure it still needs help!

http://www.completebusinessoutsourcing.com

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I really like the colors.

On the home page you write mostly in 2nd person then 1 or 2 sentences in 1st person. It confuses me when people write this way but that may just be me.

Your rates page will change as your business grows.

All in all, good job!
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Old 05-02-2009
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I like your site. Very Professional. I agree with Kasey. This is one of the biggest problems I have. I need to go back and check my website. I am sure, I have switched persons.
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Old 05-02-2009
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Thank you for making me aware of my home page! I didn't even realize I did that. I will get that changed.

I really appreciate the input ladies!

Marie
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Old 05-02-2009
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Hi Marie,
My first take on it is that I also love the colors. I'm in the process now of creating my website also and its all new to me.
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Old 05-03-2009
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Ok, sorry.....on your rates page after the high lighted sections some have no line space and others have a double space. I would make it all the same. Under method of payment on the rates page, Hourly Projects isn't capitalized, but Retainer Projects is. Again, I would make them both the same - either do or don't.

On the home page, I like the colors, but the text colors at the bottom of the page in red and light blue don't match. I would make all the colors the same, meaning black text, not blue text. Someone also mentioned this to me on my page. Keep all the font's the same. It makes it more eye pleasing.

Lastly, you might want to consider making your tab colors something close to your header, not green. I like the two colors, but not three. Either beige and green, or beige and blue. Just my two cents.

All and all everything else looks good. I'm loosing my lap top battery, so I'm trying to be quick and haven't checked for grammar or content.

Good luck!
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Old 05-04-2009
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Thank you so much everyone!! I made some changes and hope it looks better What do you think now?? http://www.completebusinessoutsourcing.com

Thank you!
Marie
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Old 05-04-2009
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Marie, Your colors are great and the site very easy to navigate. Please review your Home page second paragraph needs a rework, "projects that we are available". I have not looked too deeply into your content but it must feel good to get yourself online. Enjoy editing!!
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Old 05-06-2009
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Hi Marie,
Your bullet points on your main page are not lined up, they are above your services.
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