Hi Chauntelle

Great colors, nice use of white space - your site is pretty easy to navigate actually, the only thing I might suggest is to fatten up your links [make them bold, perhaps? or a brighter color?] but otherwise I think that part of the site makes good sense.
I was a little perplexed as to why, when I get to your Rates page I have to click another link to see the rates scale. It seems like if you're going to publish your rates to your site it might as well be right on that first page; save your potential clients a step.
The only other major suggestion I would make is to reconsider the center justification of all of your content. Some things like taglines or headings are great centered, but the rest is just so hard to read. The human eye naturally wants to follow a straight line down the left side and then scans left to right in an F shape... so you can imagine how centering everything can make reading tedious for some people.
As to the links to other VA blogs and networking sites - as great as all of that content is, it's important to think about whether or not it provides value to your potential clients.
I also noticed that the MSNBC video spot is dead and when I click the image of the red binders on your home page it opens up the image at full res which is kind of odd - so you might want to double check those.
Overall I think you did a really great job, especially considering what you had to work with! You should be proud of your efforts