Hello all,

I'd appreciate constructive criticism on my site. I will be adding a blog, but other than that I'm ready for your help. http://www.wrksmrt4u.com

Thanks in advance for your time.

Leanne

I like the clean look of your site but, at first glance, it's not clear who you are and what you're trying to say. I'm not sure that someone would "get" who you are and what exactly you're offering. You have a great testimonial from one of your clients and it could be placed differently to draw more attention it. I hope this helps!

I agree with the above statement. It's not instantly clear as to what you do.

Also have you considered designing some kind of logo for branding?

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Amanda Mock
My Virtual Little Helper

Although I have not read it through for spelling mistakes, I really like your site. It is easy to read and maneuvers very well. What a great feeling to design your own website. Kudos to you.

Nancy Lynch

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Nancy Lynch
http://www.virtualnancysbusinesssuppo rt.ca

Thank you all for your comments. I'd love to have a logo, but that will have to come when I'm making more money.

Leanne

I was really confused as to what you can do for me. You are using valuable space for the images when in fact you should be telling me what you can do for me. If I were looking for a VA and landed on your home page I do not know that I would continue.

Maybe move your copy that is down on the bottom to the top.

"Clear your desk without having to commit to a full-time employee." - This should be displayed prominently as it states the WIIFM factor.

The rest of the pages at first glance look good but you need to get people to want to visit them for those to be effective.

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Lee Drozak
My Office Assistant

Leeanne,

I like your site. I feel the images are fine and that they work well with the copy. Much success to you.

Sharon

I love your site too. Its clean, concise, and professional. Many blessings on your future success!

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Thanks, Yolanda

Loved your website! I did the opposite of you - in March arrived out West and now have our services available from our motor home we just purchased (that is why my website is going to be under revision for awhile with all the changes) -- so I appreciate your work -- Good luck!

Thank you all. I really appreciate your suggestions and the sense of community.

Leanne