I have been working on this for quite a while. I will appreciate any and all feedback. One quick note, although I do have a twitter icon listed it is not functional because I have not created my account as yet.
Desiree, I checked out you website and it looks as if you covered all the information about with services you provide and what skills you bring to the business. I'm new to the VAF, and as yet don't have a website, so maybe I'm not the one to critique your site. Best to you and your business.
The header took a long time to load so I'm not sure if the image is too large or if it just my computer lallygagging. Also check the word 'receivables' under Bookkeeping. You'll want to correct that.
Your site is clean with a lot of white space which makes for an easy read.
Good job! I'd say you have made a nice site for yourself.
Janine
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I love the content, you've done a great job there. My only suggestion is the header. Maybe it is just my PC, but it doesn't look centred to the rest of the page. The 'Social Media...tag needs to line up with your toolbar (home, about, services etc).
Your site looks very clean and easy to read. After reviewing the site I do have a couple of suggestions.
Entrepreneurs is spelled incorrectly in your header title line. It is spelled Entrepreneurs, not Entreprenuers.
The spacing in your header appears to be incorrect. (Social Media and Administrative Services for Entreprenuers and Small Businesses.) It appears that there are two spaces between the word Social and the word Media.
Additionally, you may want to consider removing the extra space on the left end of your navigation bar. After "Quote Request" there is a large blank area. (I would consider either removing the blank space, or spreading out the rest of the items on the navigation bar.)
On your home page, the navigation bar should line up with the pictures below, or it should be moved to the left margin as it is on the rest of the website pages.
On your home page under Database management, you spelled addition incorrectly. It should be addition, you missed an "i". (We can maintain and update your existing database. In addtion to designing spreadsheets in Excel. Click here for more information.)
On your home page in your first line you spelled Virtual incorrectly. It appears you spelled it Vlrtual. (DMW VIrtual Solutions provides...)
On your services page, the word forward is spelled incorrectly. It should be: Manage emails and forward only urgent emails to you.
At the bottom of your "About" page there is an extra hollow bullet point.
On your rates page under :Monthly Retainer", the word retainer should be plural - retainers. (All retainer are valid for 60 days.)
On your rates page under rush projects, I believe there should be a semi-colon ( after the word advance, instead of a comma (,).
(All work is required to be scheduled at least 48 hours in advance; however we will do our best to complete last minute assignments with the same efficiency and accuracy to meet your deadlines.)
Congrats on your site.. it is nice and clean and fresh.
Can I make a small suggestion... at the top of your website there is a huge white space above the header, plus the header itself is quite wide. I would suggest to make it a little narrower (height wise) because it all seems wasted space. You really have to scroll down to see the rest of your content.
It just makes it easier for the reader to see the majority of the page without scrolling.
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after the word advance, instead of a comma (,). 
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