Hi All,

I have recently made some changes to my website after your comments, changes I think are for the best.

Anyway, it's not quite finished, still looking for typos and places to add more content but the basic info is there.

Have a look, I appreciate any feedback.

Rach
http://www.custardspoon.com

Rach,
I just went on your website and the only things showing up are custard spoon in 2 places and the paypal icon.

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Serita Diana, the List 2 Close Assistant
REVA Academy

Originally Posted by executive_assist

Rach, I just went on your website and the only things showing up are custard spoon in 2 places and the paypal icon.

Hi,

Thankyou for reviewing my site, i've just been doing some maintenance so that's possibly why it didn't show up.
I've finished now so hopefully it will be viewable once again.

I've checked it and it seems ok.

Thankyou again.

Rachel
http://www.custardspoon.com

Hi Rachel!

This is what I have to make of your site:-
* I'm not too sure about having the logo in your text on your home page - it doesn't look right to me!
* Contact Us should be the 2nd to last page. Also, you have "Alternatively fill out our online contact form by clicking on the 'make an inquiry' link below." - the form is on a separate page. Do you intend on having the form on the same page, or are you having the form on that separate page?
* Tariffs should be before the Privacy Policy page.
* Privacy Policy's text on that page is smaller than rest of the text on the site - make it larger so it's more consistent!

Also think about the grammar on the site - i.e. using comma's or semi-colons when you need them! Also think about putting full stops at the end of the page. Grammar is everything!

I like the design of the site; however I think that the contact form looks out of place.

Hopefully I've given you some pointers to think about; however it's worth saying that a website is always a work in progress - once you've finished something on the site, you're always thinking about the next improvement!

HIH.
Rgds

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Julia Neal ...because we ♥ admin!
http://julianeal.wordpress.com

I like how the "pages" turn when you hit the tabs and the feel of the site. I found the "custardspoon" at the top hard to see. Also on the home page it says see areas of work link below, but there wasn't anything there... same on contact page.

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Amy
www.porterofficesolutions.com

You've done a good job so far. My suggestions are simple and are similar to others already made.

I would change the color and font style of your logo. Maybe making it a little larger and "cleaning" the lettering up would do. You want it noticed and easy to read, for now it reads a little "fuzzy".

I agree that the page orders should be changed. Maybe: Home, Why..., Areas ..., Tariffs, Contact/ Enquire, then Privacy.

I don't really see why you would need a "Contact Us" and an "Enquire" page. That would solve the no link issue and save confusion on the preferred forms of contact. I would refer to the tabs on your header instead of stating "see xyz link below"

Overall it's a nice site. I like how you thought to explain any tolls incurred from the calls. Helping you has helped me by looking at all these things we might be too close to see on our own. Major Kudos!!

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Charlotte

Rach,

I like how the pages turn when you choose a different header at the top. I find the font of the word CustardSpoon hard to read. The font is too bubbly and close together. I need to get going on my site so I really thank you all for putting your websites out there for us to see. Thanks.

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Sandy