Website Review Requests

For feedback and reviews of your virtual assistant business website.

Forum Sponsor (Advertise with us)
Affordable, professional WordPress website templates
Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
    #1 (permalink)  
Old 01-18-2009
Junior Member
Company name: Offsite Office Professionals, LLC
 
Join Date: Dec 2008
Posts: 294
Blog Entries: 2
Default Please review my new web site
I finally figured out CSS and built my web site so now I need you all to review it. Please be as brutal as necessary since this is what my clients will see. I personally feel the font size should be larger. Thanks so much.

http://www.offsiteofficepro.com/index.html

Jenny
Reply With Quote
    #2 (permalink)  
Old 01-19-2009
Virtual Reality's Avatar
Contributing Member
 
Join Date: Jan 2009
Posts: 61
Default Re: Please review my new web site
I think it looks good. The font definitely should be larger. I also noticed some free space between words. Once you touch up the font and work on formatting you should be set. Good Luck!
Reply With Quote
    #3 (permalink)  
Old 01-19-2009
Junior Member
Company name: Offsite Office Professionals, LLC
 
Join Date: Dec 2008
Posts: 294
Blog Entries: 2
Default Re: Please review my new web site
Thanks so much for the feedback. I noticed the spaces between words also so I'll change the justification and enlarging the fonts. I think the site is quite plain but my target audience (doctors, etc.) don't like busy web pages when they are looking for something.
Reply With Quote
    #4 (permalink)  
Old 01-19-2009
KAElliott's Avatar
Contributing Member
Company name: Magic Satchel
http://magicsatchel.com/blog/: Where are all the new posts?
 
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: Copiague, NY
Posts: 117
Send a message via Yahoo to KAElliott
Default Re: Please review my new web site
Lovely clean navigation, and very medical looking!
Reply With Quote
    #5 (permalink)  
Old 01-19-2009
Junior Member
Company name: Offsite Office Professionals, LLC
 
Join Date: Dec 2008
Posts: 294
Blog Entries: 2
Default Re: Please review my new web site
Thank you so much. I showed it to one of the doctors at my day job and he liked the ease of navigation and lack of 'cutesy fluff' (as he calls it). He did say to increase the font size though. He had some other suggestions that I'm going to implement also.

Jenny
Reply With Quote
    #6 (permalink)  
Old 01-19-2009
PamH53's Avatar
Junior Member
Company name: Admin Etcetera
Etcetera - the Blog: If You Don?t Ask??.
My latest Twitter: WooHoo!! Patriots touchdown.
 
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: Ft. Myers, Florida
Posts: 485
Default Re: Please review my new web site
I liked the look - very clean. I agree that the font should be larger. I'm not sure if I liked the services part being the same on every page. I don't see it as a negative, but just not my personal preference. Good luck with your new business.
__________________
Pam
www.adminetcetera.com
Reply With Quote
    #7 (permalink)  
Old 01-19-2009
New Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2008
Posts: 13
Default Re: Please review my new web site
Wont mention the font, I think you got that already.

But the page is nice it looks like a bulletin or something from a periodical magazine and judging by who your contact audience is it should seem familiar to them and that should be a big help.

You might also want to think about putting a rate "range" of some type. I hate it when I can't find out what it's going to cost me. Even a ballpark is better than nothing. When I can't find a price I always hear in my head that snobby women or man saying " If you have to ask dear, you can't afford it". And I go somewhere else. When I was in purchasing I was even worse, I told several people I didn't have time to waist calling to find out I can't afford you, and that your idea of competitive rates and mine don't even live in the same zip code, now I'm really behind thanks so very much. If didn't find something to indicate price I didn't even bother with a call. Most business people understand rates and that not everyone gets the same deal.

Good luck!
Reply With Quote
    #8 (permalink)  
Old 01-19-2009
Junior Member
Company name: Offsite Office Professionals, LLC
 
Join Date: Dec 2008
Posts: 294
Blog Entries: 2
Default Re: Please review my new web site
Very good suggestion about the rates being listed. I also look at rates to see if I can afford the service and most doctors I know are very cost conscious. I'm brainstorming additional info to put on the site such as a downloadable welcome packet, a sample policy and procedure, a sample telephone audit and so on.

Thanks for the suggestions and review.

Jenny
Reply With Quote
    #9 (permalink)  
Old 01-20-2009
Junior Member
Company name: Offsite Office Professionals, LLC
 
Join Date: Dec 2008
Posts: 294
Blog Entries: 2
Default Re: Please review my new web site
Pam, I see what you mean by the services being on the same page. I think I'll change that to have something different appear one each page. Sure is a work in progress at this point. Thanks for the input.

Jenny
Reply With Quote
    #10 (permalink)  
Old 01-20-2009
kkaiser's Avatar
Contributing Member
Company name: Backstage Virtual Assistant
 
Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: Rochester, NY
Posts: 151
Blog Entries: 1
Send a message via AIM to kkaiser Send a message via Yahoo to kkaiser
Default Re: Please review my new web site
Great niche with the 'hipaa' help. I work for a registered investment adviser and staying up to date with all the regulations for our industry is a job in itself... could be onto something here!
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are Off


Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Web site for review dawndmd Website Review Requests 7 09-03-2008 11:38 AM
new site review please Honeybizzle Website Review Requests 7 07-18-2008 05:22 PM
Please review my site AwesomeAssistant Website Review Requests 9 07-08-2008 09:36 PM
I welcome a review of my site CFlowers Website Review Requests 11 06-26-2008 10:27 AM
Site for Review Virtual Business Concepts Website Review Requests 10 06-10-2008 09:41 AM


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 11:29 AM.

International Virtual Assistants Association
Project Management for Virtual Assistants
Work from Home | Become A Virtual Assistant
Virtual Assistant Directory
Affordable Logo Design
Virtual Assistant Contracts
Virtual Assistant Forums Advertising

© Virtual Assistant Forums 2012
All content and images are protected under copyright law and may not be reproduced in any way without express written consent.