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Old 04-15-2009
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I have a small site running just to get my name out there on the internet. I know it still needs work doing to it and I am updating it as and when I get the time, I have had a bit of a boost up the behind lately with it and so hopefully I will manage to get things going soon.

I would appreciate some kind comments please, http://www.am-officesolutions.com

I intend to spend alot of time on VA Forums over the next few evenings after work to finally get myself into action.

Thank you all for the inspiration you have given me so far and I wish everyone well. xx
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Annette,

You website looks good. I did not read the whole thing yet, but something I noticed that you might want to consider. On the first page, I might put the second paragraph first. It explains more about what you do. And the first line will come up in a Google search, so you might want to consider that. Also, AM Office Solutions is - not are - in that paragraph.

Good Luck.
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I took a quick look and besides what Pam says above, you might want to add some alt tags to your pics. I find that I am always tweaking my site, putting things on and off, updating, checking and learning new things too.
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Thanks for the speedy responses ladies. I am always looking at the wording and noticing little things that I have overlooked, however, in this industry I don't think you can afford to make mistakes with the little things!
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One comment. When I went to the terms and conditions page I was distracted by the artwork. You might consider removing it - or making it smaller and not in the middle of the copy.

All in all it's a good start.

Question: what is Wigan?

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Old 04-16-2009
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Hi Annette,

Well done on your progress so far and great start. Our websites are always in working progress mode, a labor of love. Your website feels complete, clean and easy to navigate. My suggestion would be to make use of your keywords. Instead of saying VA, use Virtual Assistant and also update your titles on your pages, you currently have Home as the title on your homepage. Your goal is for people to be able to find you on the Internet.

Definitely read through a lot of the posts in this section and you'll get many tips.

All the best!
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Old 04-19-2009
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Hi all, thank you for the advice from each of you. Agnes, I have updated the titles on the pages and I was wondering if you could take another look for me. I have made a few changesvwith colour schemes this morning to make it look more clean cut and I will be changing some of the pictures over the next few days.
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Hello Annette:

You have plenty of content. One question, how do you feel about having the font consistent on your pages? Especially the first page? Just a thought, because not everyone chooses to do that for creative reasons.

Otherwise, you are coming along nicely. I agree that our websites will always be a work in progress. I love doing it. Maybe sometimes too much.

Good work!
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Annette,

I liked the colors. There are some places that have typos & such. But overall it looks great. As Delilah pointed out, a website is always a work in progress or at least mine seems that way.
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