Hi everyone!
I would love any feedback on my website please. What's good and what can use improvement would be a great help for me.

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Terri Williams, Assisting the small business owner
www.terripwilliams.com

My first question is as virtual why are you limiting yourself to these counties?

I also would reword: "I hope to meet you soon and am able to assist you with your business!"
It would be nice to meet you too but what is your call to action here.

As for your home page, I get that you are here to help me but with with what? Most times people skim to see whether they should go further.

"To assist the small business owner with their organizational details enabling them to focus on customer relationships and growing their business!"

Why would I choose you over the hundreds of other choices. What is it that you can offer me that others cannot.

And finally, what is the purpose of your Non-Profit page. Do you offer them something special? I was really confused by this one.

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Lee Drozak
My Office Assistant

Thank you, Lee! You gave me some things to really think about. I am glad you gave me the feedback you did...I've been asked the same questions by others.

Counties -- The difference with my company is that I want to meet my clients one-on-one, eye-to-eye. I'm not interested in being 'virtual' throughout the United States at this time. I am offering my services to local businesses.
Non-profit - yes, depending on their needs (again, wanting to meet them personally in my county) I will be offering a discount to their organization.

Last page - call to action! Thank you for this...I'll be updating that sentence.
I appreciate your feedback and great questions.

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Terri Williams, Assisting the small business owner
www.terripwilliams.com

Hi Terri,

I think your website is very straight forward and it projects your targeted market, local businesses with a focus on non-profits (correct me if I'm wrong). I don't see a problem with limiting yourself to local business owners if that is what you want. I agree that sometimes that personal touch (face-to-face contact, etc.) is definitely a selling point.

Anita

Anita,

Hummmm, I don't want to focus on the nonprofit; however, nonprofits will be a portion of my business. I'll need to take another look at how my site is set up.
Thank you for the feedback!

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Terri Williams, Assisting the small business owner
www.terripwilliams.com