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Old 03-10-2010
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I am very new to being a VA and have just got my website up and running.

I am after some feedback, the more i look at it, the more i think that i need to add to the information that i have up.

http://www.totaltranscription.net.au

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Kim
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Old 03-11-2010
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Hi Kim,

I think you have a great start on your website! Here are a just few things I noticed:

1. There is no "HOME" tab, so after I looked at the other tabs, I couldn't get back to your home page.

2. On the first page, the paragraph about your business needs to have the punctuation corrected. It is a long, run-on sentence and could be re-written a little differently.

3. Also, you have written "proofreading" different ways on different pages.

I'm not a web designer at all so I won't be much help with other aspects, but there are others on this forum that will be able help.

Good luck with the site!
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Old 03-11-2010
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Kim,

I agree on the homepage and you have a lot of "above the fold" wasted space. You may wan to move you description up so that those landing on your home page do not have to scroll down to find it.

Great start though. I also noticed that you have no page titles and "untitled document" comes up as the page title. Did you make this in flash? I am not an expert on this but at the very least you should have page titles and some meta tags.
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Old 03-11-2010
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Company name: Leigh Lopez Virtual Office Solutions
 
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Hi there! Well for starters I'd like to say that I love the layout - it's unique and eye catching! I also really like your contact form. It's clean and you are able to get a lot of information from prospective clients with it, which is nice. The only thing that I would do is maybe make the font a bit more in line with your layout - maybe find a type-writer style font to use for your headlines and in your About Me section. Also, maybe some images for visual appeal? Overall though, I quite like it!
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Hi, I really like the look of your site....it is unique and easy to navigate. Your contact page is great! A few things to look at would be: there is alot of white space on the landing page, maybe move the paragraph up and make the font larger. Also there are no page titles - they just say Untitled Document, that would need to be fixed to reflect the page that you are on, like HOME, SERVICES, etc.

Great Job!
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