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Old 10-21-2009
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Hi all, I've been busy working on my website for the last couple of weeks and would appreciate it if you could cast your eye over it and give me some feedback.

www.conorsadmin.co.za

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Looks nice and clean. I like the lines in it too. Good job!
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Hey Trish!

First of all, I'm from South Africa too! Awesome to see some locals here! Yay!

Anyway... you're website looks great, very clean, simple, but attractive. Just a few things though:

1.) You might want to check... I'm using FireFox and the search bar and the adsense are a bit out of the sidebar.
2.) If I were you, I'd put some bullets in where the pages are listed in the sidebar... it will look less crowded that way, and just be easier to see what's being listed there.
3.) On your contact page, I saw you have Twitter and Facebook... it's always good to put the links Twitter and Facebook icons on your homepage, which links to your profiles!

Just some tips... other than that, it's pretty good! Good to see a fellow South African!
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Hi Trish,
You've done a beautiful job. You should be very proud.

One thing:
You are running a business and are trying to attract clients. Putting adsense on your company website turns off a lot of visitors.
They are coming to check you out and see what services you are offering but they get distracted by the advertising. The only thing you should be "advertising" is yourself.

Now if it was a blog with posts, that would be different. Visitors almost expect to see advertising on blogs.
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Hi Trish,

It looks very professionals. Good luck.

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Hi Trish,

I wonder if you could put a background on your name "conorsadmin.co.za" to make it more visible but no I take that back, it is your web address. I think it would be better to put the name of your business "Conors Admin Services". up in that left corner.

l like the colors and feel and that fuzzy bar in the middle. Looks professional except for the ads which do extend over your right margin.

I read through your site and there are a few places where you need to tighten up your wording. For Example "You no longer have to worry about the additional costs of employees on your payroll." could be " You will not have additional employee costs." Payroll refers to salary, the additional costs are, training, software, benefits, and office space/rent. Have someone not in the business read it and give you their thoughts.

Everything seems to link smoothly, great to see all your hard work has paid off.

Cheers!!
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Old 10-26-2009
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Thanks ladies, I'll certainly look at all those things and see what I can do to tighen it up.

Thanks for the feedback.
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