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Old 02-11-2010
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Company name: Solterra Virtual Solutions
 
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Nearly done...I think!
Howdy all!
These cruddy blizzards gave me the incentive to stay in and finally get my website made! So - here it is. Needs some refining and wordsmithing...and definitely a website email and a form on the contact page. Any hints on where I might find a generic form?

This website is purposely very plain, simple and non-intimidating. The people I plan to appeal to aren't necessarily tech savvy - they know how to do basic computer stuff and email, but don't have the time or inclination to learn more.

My website is mostly a resource for potential clients to check out after they get one of my pamphlets or business cards. I also did something different on the "Advantages" page. I didn't use the rate calculator; instead I compared rates of a part time employee to my discounted retainer fee. Most small businesses around here couldn't afford full time help at $25 an hour. The small businesses I worked for paid me $15 an hour as a full time admin assistant. That's why I've gone that route.

Sooo...any ideas? Sometimes I can be rather circular in my writing - see anything where I can tighten it up? Anything stick out like a sore thumb? Any and all help will be appreciated...!

Thanks much!

www.solterravs.com
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Old 02-12-2010
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Company name: Laserdog Productions
 
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Location: Lafayette, CO
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Hi Lori,

I really like your site! It's visually appealing & very clean. Your tagline & banner are really appropriate for your company name. Nice! I also like your little cartoons - the cannon blasting the computer being my fave. They add a nice touch!

If I didn't know a thing about VAs, I would definitely know after reading through your site. I think your writing is just fine.


Nice work!!
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Old 02-13-2010
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Company name: Hadry and Associates
 
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I like your site it is very informative without being overly conjested!
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Old 02-13-2010
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Company name: Virtual Word Publishing
 
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Location: Margate, Florida
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Hi

I too like your site. The cartoons rock!

Can you make every page about the same size though. Like the contact page appears smaller than the rest of them.

Good job!

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Old 02-13-2010
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Company name: Solterra Virtual Solutions
 
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Thanks for the input! I know I'll be tweaking it for a while yet - and I will have more info for the contact page, so it doesn't look so short.

I want to accept PayPal - now I have to figure out how to do that! I have Paypal for my own uses (like buying on eBay!), but is setting up a business Paypal account different? Can anyone tell me how that works - or should I post that question in a different forum? Or is Paypal totally overrrated and some other method is preferable?

Thanks!
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