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dage292 · #1 (**permalink**) 12-31-2010

OK everyone, got a webpage up but not complete. I wanted to go ahead and put it out there and get some feedback. PLEASE PLEASE take a look at it and give me your thoughts. I still have to take another pic and it needs some tweeks.. but its up

The web page is dageenterprises.com

THANKS!!!

BehindTheDeskSolutions · #2 (**permalink**) 12-31-2010

Looking good!

My first impression was that I skipped the flash intro immediately. Honestly, I do that on many sites I visit, though.

On your home page, remove the counter. That is very 'old school.'

Set up google analytics on your website (if you need help, just PM me, it is easy!)

I would break out the "DAGE" part, perhaps on the top of that paragraph like this...
D....
A....
G....
E....
and then your intro paragraph under that.

Great start!

leedrozak · #3 (**permalink**) 12-31-2010

I agree with Carrie, there is no need for the flash page or the counter. On you header is there a way to make your company name and tagline larger and your picture just a tad smaller? Also, to me it seems that the text is large yet on your contact page is is very small. You should make it more consistent.

dage292 · #4 (**permalink**) 12-31-2010

Thanks for all the tips... I will go back and try to make some corrections! I appreciate all the help that you guys have given me. I will let you know whn the changes are done for another review... Thanks again...

calliope · #5 (**permalink**) 12-31-2010

When the Services you provide ready, I would just put them all on one Page and I would move the cost comparison chart to the FAQ.

Also I think the navigation tabs at the top are enough. The ones on the bottom just seem redundant

I love the colour scheme.

Teressa · #6 (**permalink**) 12-31-2010

On the navigation tabs I would put Home and Services as the first two and then the others. Can't wait to see it when your finished. : )

cheenee_laptoprunner · #7 (**permalink**) 01-02-2011

Try adding some pictures on it too..and I think you should add an About Us tab too where you can detail the things about your company.. Hope this helps..n_n

dage292 · #8 (**permalink**) 01-13-2011

Ok everyone... some changes have been made.... Please give your feedback. I greatly appreciate any tips that you can give me. One of the things that I think that I need to do is make the font larger...???

http://dageenterprises.com/wordpress/

Amanda1987 · #9 (**permalink**) 01-13-2011

The website is decent and large enough. But one thing I see is that I can't tell immediately what you do. You have about 5 seconds to win people over when they come to your website, so what you want to do with your home page is tell people what you want them to know.