Hi everyone,

I've changed my VA site significantly recently and I'm wondering if I made it too simple. I switched to Wordpress and found a free template that fit and then I ruthlessly cut much of the text to make it more simple. I also removed my long services list and started using categories of services I provide. I'd love to get some feedback to see if I've gone too far to make it more simple.

Thanks!

Bonnie

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Bonnie Jo Davis is a marketing VA
http://www.your-marketing-assistant.com

Pretty! I have not looked into the content but my first impression is positive. I like the color, the header, etc.

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Lisa Olinda of Olinda Services
Keeping you on the path to success!
www.olindaservices.com

Hi Bonnie,

I think it looks great. My thoughts are there is just enough information to get the perspective client to contact you and not so much they feel overwhelmed.

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Ruth M Callejas, Lead Consult Admin & More
Taking Care Of The 'To Do' List, So You Can Take Care Of Business

I think the website looks great and seems to be just right in terms of content. I love the hip girl on the stool. Cool looking yet professional. Nice

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Stephanie
New VA in the research phase :daisy:

Hi Bonnie;

Love the look of your site - nice and clean and just the right amount of info on each page. In quick scan of content I found the following that you may consider updating:

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My clients make more money after they start working for me because I keep the marketing engine going while they do what they do best… speaking, consulting, coaching or providing products and services.

I think you meant to say "after they start working with me..."

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You can use the Paypal button below to pay for the service and then e-mail the twenty pieces of content to

I did not see a Paypal button below as you indicate.

Your site is very clear and I applaud you for outlining how you choose and work with your clients -- this makes choosing your services very easy for prospective clients.

Good luck,

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Cindy
www.eoseasy.comThe Chrysalis Plan

I think your website looks great Bonnie and it has just the right amount of information. Well done.

Bonnie I think you've done a fabulous job!

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Kim Contreras, Owner
The Associate, LLC - Your Virtual Colleague

The site looks very professional and clear. There's just the right amount of information to entice a client to get in touch with you if they want more details. It looks Great too!

I really like how you have the site laid out. I am a fan of the darker backgrounds, which I use on my site too. The information is good.

Here are my two comments/suggestions:

The logo.....I really want to like the logo, but I don't.....I think the idea of using a "cartoon" type of character is just fine and I've seen other websites that use that same type of concept. But when I look at her, I don't see a professional - which I could probably get over. There's something about her eyes that isn't very welcoming - it could totally be just ME.

Clients Page......you have a very extensive list of clients and that is going to tell a prospective client that you are well established. However, what would be of much higher value to me if I were in there shoes would be a Testimonials page vs. a list. Even if you just had a handful of testimonials on that page, I think it would be more important to me than just a list.

Just my two cents!!!

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Kari Thevenot, Virtual Assistant
www.yourlefthand.net

Bonnie,

Great job, however my three comments are:

1. The logo. When I look at I think of my teen children and all the technology they are into. I like the logo but not to convey a professional image. This is just my 2 cents but I cannot seem to get past that.

2. Client list. I know it says past and present but prospects will not see this. They will see a laundry list and wonder how a one person office has time to service all the clients on the list. I would change this to testimonials or pare it down to a great short list.

3. Policies. "I will not take on more than one client in the same field or who sells the same type of product." This would make me leave your page immediately. I would not even waste my time to pursue after looking at your long client list.

Hope this helps.

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Lee Drozak
My Office Assistant