Your site does look very clean. I would recommend proofreading. I found a few typos on your services page as well. Get someone you know to read through it thoroughly.

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I like your new website alot! You did a great job!

Hello Melissa, I'm not sure if anyone else has addressed this, but on the home page, the very bottom that say, "Take some time to browse our site and see how we can help you launch your business into a whole new realm!" to me looks off with the rest of the page. I would consider centering it since everything else is.

This could be a personal issue with me, but I think on your bio page, if you justified the paragraphs it would look more crisp! The U in "Don't continue to feel overwhelmed ... Contact Us today for a free consulation (when I did a spell ck on my reply this came up as a typo)!" on your bio page should not be capitalized.


Under the SERVICES page, under desktop publishing, "Presentations,including PPS" you need a space after the comma.

Same page, under data base management, " Custom Database" - There's an extras space in front of the Custom.

Same page, under personal assistant, "Individualized Chore Charts" the "chart" should be moved in to line up with with individualized. Also, "Make reservations", the R is reservations should be capitalized, like all the second words on the page are.

Your PORTFOLIO page is very nice!

On the LINKS page, is there anyway you can sharpen up her business card? I would hate for people to see this card as a reflection on your work. Your PORTFOLIO page is crisp - sharp and professional, but this card is fuzzy.

Overall, I didn't proof for spelling, more for layout, so don't hold me to any spelling. I sure hope when I'm finished with my web page, I'll receive replies such as you. I hate to proof myself and it's so hard when you're working on the document for several days everything just keeps running together and after a while it all looks the same.

Nice job!

Robin Besotes
The Doctor's Rx
"The Doctor's Prescription for Success"

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Melissa, another comment on your rates. On the RATES page it indicated one figure, then on your GRID it speaks of another rate - then at the bottom of your RATES page another rate (which I do understand is less for the particular job). Did you want these two (not the personal assistant rate, but the other two) to conflict? It seams like too many figures to keep track of for a client. Maybe change the comparison page and you'll be set.

Hi Melissa! I agree with the other comments. Your website looks great, but I would replace the images. Also on the home page, it says "unorganized". I would change it to say "disorganized". On the comparison grid, "workplace" has a typo. Other then that, great job! I'm working on my website right now!

Melissa,

Okay, so you probably got more feedback than you anticipated. So here goes.

First question...on the Rates/Packages page, did you intend the subheading to be "Retailer" or "Retainer"? Wasn't sure, but you talk about retainers so thought this might be a typo. If not a typo you might want to make it clear throughout the entire website that you are targeting Retailers.

Secondly, I thought the website looks good. I peruse some of the other VA websites to get an idea of what I like and what I don't as far as info, style etc...

Biggest remark, website is not memorable. There is nothing there that stands out, words or pictures. Looks good, but like alot of others. Go for your own style. But much better than mine, since my website is not really done yet

Good job.

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Hello,

I like the site very much. You've gotten some great advice here.

I saw a word that woudl need to be corrected under the Service tab.

Survey Preperation

I'd go over the service page because the line-up is incorrect as well and looks 'off'. Try copying into notepad and reformatting with bullets and then recopy back in.

Good site overall.

Jan

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This may be browser/monior related but the silver oval at the top of your page is very dark on the right hand side. Reading the word "Dynamic" was a stretch, but I had to really focus to get "Results." BTW, I think the small green circle on the left detracts from your silver oval.

I'm new to all this, but it seems to me you have covered just about everything. Good luck!