Great job, Joy!
I like the quotes that you peppered throughout the site. That, along with your About Me page, really helps me get a sense of the person I would be working with, which makes me feel a lot more comfortable about contacting you! And like the others, I really like your color scheme, too.
The feedback I'd offer is that the two overlapping swirly designs at the top of your page kept grabbing my attention away from the content. (That I'm sure you worked hard on.) Lines encourage the eye to travel along them, and with so many lines starting and stopping in different places, it felt a bit dischordant. It's sort of hard to describe in words, but my eyes kept moving back up there, like it wasn't quite fading into the background.
This is your own personal decision, of course! I think that showing your personal style is very valuable. But I'd suggest choosing just one background to keep up there, and getting rid of the other one, because I think that will help direct the reader's focus to your content, which is where all the important stuff is!
Good luck and again, nice job on your site! I hope it gives your business a boost!
Re: My first web site!
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