Hi all I have just about finished my website and was wondering if I can get some other feedback on it thus far. My family says its great but, I want to make sure. I want it to be perfect lol. Thanks all for helping me

www.wowvirtualassistantservices.com

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~Mandy~http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/6859/1244872469.png

Great start, colors are good choice and loaded quickly in IE and FireFox. I would rearrange the page order on your site, Home, About Us, Services, Rates, Contact then Site Map. I found sections underlined on the Services page made me think they were linkes, perhaps you could just bold them with no underling. Other than that the site is VERY GOOD, you are well on your way, oh and your family is right too!!.

Cheers!!

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Bernice
Energy Virtual Assistant

I really like the colors!

I agree Bernice about re-ordering the pages on the site.

On the Services Page, your first paragraph could possibly use some rewording:
Here are some of my service that I offer, always if you do not see something that you may need. Please contact us, I am willing to Help in any way I can. But always ask I can always find your answer! I am always willing to learn new things. I am here to make your life alot easier!

--Not sure if it's intentional, but Help is capitalized in the 2nd sentence.
--You change the pronoun usage in the 2nd sentence from us to I.
--The 3rd sentence uses always twice and appears to be fragmented. In your last sentence, you want a space in alot for a lot - which is the correct spelling.


Hope that helps!

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Crystal Coleman, The Northern Edge

Thank You Bernice,

Took your advice about the underline part and I did also change page layout. Thanks again on your feedback

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~Mandy~http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/6859/1244872469.png

Thanks Crystal,
yes that does help, I am going back now to change it. I read that over and over (late at night) and it sounded right.LOL.... no more working late. Thank again

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~Mandy~http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/6859/1244872469.png

Nice job on your website; a couple of errors I saw, if you want to correct them; in the "about" section, you spelled organized as oragnized, and in the services section, I think you want a comma after the 2nd line, instead of a period. Otherwise, good job!

~ Rhonda

Thanks Rhonda,
I must of over looked that I will change it.Thanks again for taking the time to look .

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~Mandy~http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/6859/1244872469.png

Oh how I just love the picture on your intro screen (I wish I could have found that one, when I was searching-lol)

I like your WOW-statment/acronym!
I noticed on your "about page" there is a lot of space right before your introduction statement "Amanda Ross is the owner of..." was there a picture there that has since been removed?

On the services page, I believe the sentence structure if off a bit: Here are some of my service that I offer, always if you do not see something that you may need

The sentence is left with an incomplete thought at the end. Can I suggest?
Here are some of the services I offer, if you do not see something that you may need please contact me.

Be careful on your "rates" page your centering of data may be off a bit.

Also as your clients begin to get in touch with you, unfortunately I don't see a contact phone number listed, will you publish a phone contact for your clients?

Hope my little bit of critiquing is helpful.
Best wishes for much success with your business!
~Capricia

"Some of her services are but not limited to sales, incoming and out going calls, invoices, emailing and faxing, newsletters, flyers, reseach and planning for business and personal
events, postcards, postings for Ebay, Myspace, Craigslists and Personal Websites."

I found this sentence a little confusing.

Love the colors of your site. I'm a stickler for details but I personally would be consistent across each page. For instance, the home page, about page, contact page and site page all have a title at the beginning whereas the services and rates page do not. I'd also loose some of the white space at the top of the services page.

Hope you find this helpful.
Amanda

Love the colours and the pic

Just a couple of styling ideas which is personal preference...on the homepage personally i would stick to one text format for your paragraphs, either left aligned or center aligned. Having one and not mixed will keep a continuity throughout your site. Also not sure if it's my eyes as it's almost midnight here now and i'm sitting in the dark lol but it looks like your list "sales, invoicing, emailing" etc is not lined up properly, some of the first letters of each line seem slightly off. Lastly, maybe on your home page instead of having the heading "home page" maybe change it to something like "welcome to...." so the heading could be Welcome to WOW Vitual Assistant Services and then start your next paragraph with "We are a virtual office....etc"

Just a few ideas of what i would do but overall a great job...oh and did i mention my favourite color is green? lol