I need help with my home page. I have been working really hard on my re-branding efforts since the start of 2012 and I'm still not happy with my home page. I can move the content that's on the home page to another page, but I want something different. I am struggling with this. My home page is my landing page so I really need to grab their attention and tell them what I want them to do, but I'm just stuck on how to get it done.

I don't want the cheesy typical sales gimicks. I want something that will really make an impression.

Any suggestions or advice would be greatly appreciated.

http://RhondasVirtualOffice.com

Thanks all!
Rhonda

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The only think I can think of, after reviewing your website, is to maybe give a story about why they would need a VA next to the picture? I'm not sure, since I'm new at this myself.

On the other hand, I do like how professional your site looks, especially your letters of recommendation. I actually looked at yours when I first joined to get some ideas on what I could do, so kudos to you

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Elizabeth Whittaker
Renegade Virtual Services

Elizabeth,

Thanks for your feedback and you compliments. Greatly appreciated! I have worked very hard to get my website just the way I want it, and am still making changes.

My problem is I am getting tons of hits, but the home page is just not getting enough of them moving deeper. So I know I need to do something different. I'm just not sure what. Like I said I don't want it to look cheesy, but I want it to grab their interest and get them moving forward and deeper into my site. So I need some really good call to action here.

Hope you are having a great weekend and best of luck with your business!
Rhonda

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I really like your new site, but the home page is generic to most virtual assistants. Maybe if you highlighted how you can help with the pain points that business owners have it would drive someone to delve deeper into your site. Addressing prospective clients needs on your home page and adding links to your services page should get people to look at the rest of your site.

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Margaret
Helping You Build Your Empire

Thank you Margaret for your suggestion. I made some changes to the home page and would appreciate any input on them. http://rhondasvirtualoffice.com

Thanks,
Rhonda

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I really like what you did! The only thing I would change is to put "Let Rhonda's Virtual Office simplify your life!" where you now have "If you said yes, then you've come to the right place!!!" Hopefully, when a visitor to your site sees a phrase about simplifying their life they will dig deeper to learn more.

I like your color scheme too!

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Margaret
Helping You Build Your Empire

Thanks Margaret! I like that better. I will change it.

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