so i had a site designed and then my web guy could not finish so i had to redesign and rework everything. I am getting ready to relaunch the site but want to make sure everything is working - links and so on

sometimes it takes another pair of eyes to find an error

thanks

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Cathy
Web: http://www.reaysolutions.com

Love the logo! One thing, though (I'm pretty anal about these things) there is a phone handset in a hand as well as on the desk. I would either take the handset off of the phone or change what the hand is holding.

HOME PAGE

...partners with our clients, on all levels to ensure [either remove the comma or add one after levels]

...they live nowhere near you!” [where is the opening quote mark?]

You are not obligated to pay for a certain set of hours per week [might want to consider re-wording this if you plan on requiring a minimum charge]

You can accelerate your business growth by freeing up your time to focus on the more important aspects of your business. [again, I would re-word this. What you are offering is just as important as any other part of the business, but is more maintenance than growth]

COST COMPARISON PAGE
When you partner with VEA Solutions a full [VEA Solutions?]

SERVICES PAGE

Unsure of an area of service then please contact us for a free consultation. [sounds awkward]

... from our extensive Virtual Assistant community. [I suggest 'network' rather than 'community']

human resources bulleted list [make this consistent - either sentence case or title case, not both]

RATES PAGE

...do not carry over to following month. [THE following month]

...for a project and do not want the... [and WHO/WHOM (never can remember which is correct) do not...]

Refer a client to Reay Solutions and they sign a ... [and WHEN they sign a]

There will be a $30.00 refund charge for any returned checks. [refund charge or return charge?]

My only other comment is that the Headings on each page need to be changed to reflect what page they are viewing (home, services, etc.) Hope this helps!

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Lily Chambers, The Virtual Office Goddess, LLC
Author "How to Do Your Own Small Business Bookkeeping"

All the links worked great. I didn't do an in depth look at spelling, etc., but here are a couple things:

On the Home page:

The irony is you may never meet your VA as odds are they live nowhere near you!” <--remove the quote.

I notice on the Services page under Admin Sup that it looks like this with my browser (FF):

Handling Phone Calls, Retrieve
Voicemail,
Forward Messages, or Return Calls

It wraps the text after 'retrieve' to the next line and then starts a new line for the rest...could be that 'voicemail' just won't fit on above line? Or could be my browser

Wonderful phrasing on your site! Super job!

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Jules, SunRise Virtual Solutions - WordPress Customization & XHTML/CSS Web Sites

I love that little gal with the multi arms LOL really cool

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Action Jackson Virtual Assistant|

thank you everyone for your comments. i will be working on the site over the next few days

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Cathy
Web: http://www.reaysolutions.com

I like the site. Well done. My only opinion is on the services page you have this line...

"Reay Solutions provides a full range of virtual support from general administrative support to"

I would refrain from using the word 'support' twice as it doesn't sound right, maybe change virtual support to virtual assistance or something long those line?

Just my opinion.

Great site though.

Great site and that Logo, I had thought of something like that too or is it that I feel like that sometimes lol. In any event the links work well and I think your phrasing is great, Well done Cathy.

Cheers!!

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Bernice
Energy Virtual Assistant