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Old 01-24-2009
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Default First official draft is done - comments please
My first official draft of my website is done, and I was hoping to get feedback about what you like and don't like about it.

I'm open to changing just about anything from colours to design to text.

Thanks for all your imput!

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Old 01-25-2009
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Hello Dawn,

I like your choice of colours and a I like your logo.

I did notice that on the Welcome Desk page, one of the images is blocking some of the printed info. Actually,the same thing is happening on every page. The Resources page goes to a 404 error. These are things that I am sure you can easily correct.

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Thanks Heather - I just checked the site in IE and Firefox and don't see those errors - everything seems to be working alright for me. What browser do you use?

Anyone else seeing these problems when you visit the site?
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Yes, the graphics are out of whack. They did move a little when I made my browser larger. Do you have a wide screen monitor? I so that may be the problem. They fit on your screen but not on a regular size screen.

I like your company name, very original. I like the site colors too. I think if you can figure out the problem with the graphics, you'll have a winner.
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Yes, I do have a wider screen monitor. =(

Any thoughts on how I can fix it if I can't see the problem?
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Nope, I'm a bean counter. I'm sure one of our techies will be able to help though.
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Hi Dawn,

I am using IE 7.0 on my laptop. Maybe that's the reason.

Heather
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I've adjusted the graphics on the main screen - does that make a difference when you guys look at it? I created it after changing the resolution on my screen to 1024x768
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HI there, yes - the home page looks fine now but the rest of your pages will need the same treatment. Great job figuring out how to reset your resolution!
Once you've fixed the rest of the pages post back and let us know
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Hi Dawn,

On many pages, you have photos that cover the text. Oh - I see others have mentioned that. Good luck on the fix!

Although I really like the look of the light pink text boxes on the left hand side of some of your pages, I find it difficult to read. The darker pink in your menu selection is much easier to read.

I would suggest putting a little bit of space (padding?) between your left margin of text & whatever it's next to.

I like the little cartoon guys on your home page. I was an Archie fan & he kind of reminds me of him.

I really like your tagline - No More Manic Monday's. Very nice!

Overall, a visually appealing website. I love the colors! I remember years ago my mother painted our kitchen light pink & went with a pink & brown theme. I really liked it.

Lezly

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