Hi all,

Please review and let me know what you think or what might or might not need to be done.

jsvirtualassistant.web.officel ive.com

Thanks

Oops... I noticed on the thread that it is coming up with a space between the word officelive and it should not be it is all one word. Maybe I can get some help on this, why is it splitting?

Hi

Nice that you have your form of contract available for the client to see upfront.

I am a little confused about your resource page. Are you part of Virtual Assistant . org or are they a direct competitor?

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Kittie
Indigo Girl - Your Girl Friday

Thanks no I am not a member. In my researching info on VAs they were one of the links I had saved before I found VA forum.

In that case I would remove them and secretaries on demand.

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Kittie
Indigo Girl - Your Girl Friday

Congratulations on getting your first website up and running! As you asked for feedback, here are a few things you might want to consider:

I like the colors. Very professional looking. The home page is a bit wordy. You may lose a viewer's interest by providing too much information in one place. Try dividing text up or paring it down. Check capitalization for consistency. Your slogan and many areas where you have bold headings uses mixed capitalization. Spell check EVERY page. I see a few punctuation errors, extra spaces here and there and sentence fragmentation. Maintain font consistency between pages. I am not a big fan of free website templates for several reasons. How will you include your URL on business cards, stationary, etc.? How will your website be marketed, submitted to search engines, etc.? Will your clients view you as professional if you use a freebie?

You have an excellent start and lots of good information. Hopefully the comments provided here will help you tweak the site a bit. Good luck.

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Liz Provo
Mass Marketing Resources

I really like it! You biggest part of it is done!!

May I make one little suggestion and it is only a suggestion....On your Contact Us page. I would make your form the primary focus of the page. Maybe take your Privacy verbage and put it on a separate page and link to it via a little javascript pop up page.

Job Well Done!!

Sue