I like the colors!

I would make a couple changes:

1. See if you can find a template (or add it into the code, if it's avaiilable through wordpress.org) where you can add the pages underneath the header, horizontally. Easier to find & navigate.

2. In that space opened up on right by above, add in a newsletter opt-in, so you can keep in touch with website visitors if they so choose. Be sure to add in a free report or something to entice signups.

~Erin

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~Erin Banister
TheMarketingVA | TrinityJacobs

Thank you to everyone! I am so excited that you took the time to help me out. What a great bunch you are!

Dina

I feel that you have had some good advsie from others. To me, it does seem a bit plain but on the other hand I like it. I couldn't find any contact details anywhere.

I personally am not keen on subdomains as they seem too long to type, if I were you I would register rosebudvirtualservices.com (this will also prevent somone buying it and trying to sell it to you).

I already have the domain, so it is just a matter of paying for the hosting.

I have added my contact page and my cost analysis page. I will have more options for editing as well, when I get the site hosted.

Dina

OK, I have added a rosebud. I think it looks kind of like an old west "brand". What do you think?

Thank you in advance for your feedback.

Dina

I think it looks nicer now. It is still a little plain, but is much improved.

Suggestion?: Why not use a Script font for your name, as you have done for headings. I would bold it and use the italic font.

Also, instead of saying: "How can that help my business?"

How about a heading that says: "Business benefits" or "Benefits to your business".

This is a really nice start for your business. As time progresses, I'm sure you will want to add more or re-organized it, but for your first time out, I think it is a really good effort.

Thanks again. I am not sure how to change the font in the header when using the free wordpress site. As soon as I get it hosted, I am sure I can get that changed.

Thank you so much,
Dina

I like it a lot. After reading everyone else's posts, I see you have added the rosebud. The only two things I noticed:

1) There is a publish date/time on each page. Unless you have it there for a reason, I would suggest that you remove it.

2) I would suggest a short form on this page to gather a little information from the person/company contacting you. Just basic stuff such as name, company, email and maybe a field where they can insert what their business challenges are.

Just my thoughts

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Monica West|www.prismvirtual.com
Prism Virtual Business Services

I guess the publish date is something I cannot edit using the free wordpress template. Thank you for the advise on the form. I will get one on there.

Thanks,
Dina
www.rosebudvirtualservices.wordpress.com

Simplicity can be elegant and you've captured that. The rose adds impact.