Hi Everyone,

I've been playing with my website as usual!

Does the Home page look to cluttered and have to much information that I should move to a different page?

www.gemsvirtualoffice.com

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Deb Frawley
Gem's Virtual Office

To be honest... I was really overwhelmed... there was too much information on that page. My eyes weren't sure what to read first.

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Bette Creek
http://bettecreek.blogspot.com/
www.ashbusinessservices.com

Yes But you must already know this or you wouldn't be asking...
I would take a look at what you've got on the page and how it's laid out and rework so the front page is in two columns - one main paragraph of info/pain points/calls to action and then a sidebar with 'extras' etc.

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Ok that's what I thought....thanks for the honest input. I'll rework it and let you know when I'm done to check it out again.

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Deb Frawley
Gem's Virtual Office

Hi Deb,

I tend to agree with Bette. I think your home page could benefit from a little less. However, having said that... removing the underlines might help. They shouldn't be there if there is no link to follow. It is a little confusing. Try removing them and see how it looks.

Also, your title tags still need a little more work. Take off 'home' and space each tag out just a bit. Also, don't forget to include some of your best services in your tag on your services page. And take your most important keywords from each page and place one or 2 of them in the tags on each page. And don't forget to read the SEO section of the forums. I know it seems complicated and boring but its worth it.

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Shari Sultana
Online Business Manager (marketing for retail ecommerce)

Originally Posted by Tess

Yes But you must already know this or you wouldn't be asking... I would take a look at what you've got on the page and how it's laid out and rework so the front page is in two columns - one main paragraph of info/pain points/calls to action and then a sidebar with 'extras' etc.

That's a more useful response than mine. Sorry... It's Friday and my brain wants to shut down.

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Bette Creek
http://bettecreek.blogspot.com/
www.ashbusinessservices.com

Ok Ladies is that any better? I haven't gotten to the title tags yet as you suggested on Monday Shari...I'll get to that this weekend sometime. I just wanted to get the whole site looking better first....hope this has helped, thanks for the help

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Deb Frawley
Gem's Virtual Office

I think it looks much better!

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Shari Sultana
Online Business Manager (marketing for retail ecommerce)

It looks alot better than before.

How about condensing "How to work with a Va" and " What is a VA". I'm not sure there is a need to use both. Also the font colour for "10 tasks" seems to throwing me off. The title doesn't stand out.

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Bette Creek
http://bettecreek.blogspot.com/
www.ashbusinessservices.com

Looks good -

I found one itsy bitsy typo!

Under Terms & Billing, it should be "accept" instead of "except". I definitely wasn't looking for spelling, it just kinda popped out to me.