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#1 (permalink)   08-02-2009 AdGenie New Member Company name: The Administrative Genie My latest Twitter: Administrative Genie w/15 years experience seeks E...   Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Newark, NJ Posts: 10 Critiques Please... TheAdministrativeGenie.com Worked hard at it, but open to suggestions and not "married" to any of it. Thanks. __________________ Tameka E. Thomas TheAdministrativeGenie.com

#2 (permalink)   08-03-2009 kimbeckers Junior Member Company name: Kim Beckers My latest Twitter: Thanks @jpruittmgt, have an awesome day!   Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Long Island, NY Posts: 327 Re: Critiques Please... Hi Tameka, Great job at getting your website up, looking good. Here are a few suggestions :-) The white letters on the gray background are a bit hard on my eyes, let's see what other people think as well, it just may be my eyes and the blue in the background is a bit bright, other than that, great start :-) Keep up the good work. Kim __________________ Kim Beckers Online Business Manager

#3 (permalink)   08-03-2009 daisymss Contributing Member Company name: Actual Delegation My latest Twitter: @jkvirtualoffice Wi -Fi is free with a registere...   Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: New York Posts: 60 Re: Critiques Please... I agree with Kim about the blue...a bit harsh on the eyes... In the "What We Do" area..it doesn't seem to flow. Maybe a line followed by services listed in bullet format? We Offer A Wide Range of Services: (something more polished of course) bullet points here End with something along the lines of "if you don't see it here, just ask" Hope this helps! Marisa Actual Delegation

#4 (permalink)   08-04-2009 ss-bs Contributing Member   Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 55 Re: Critiques Please... I agree with above posts, the blue on the grey background seems too 'bright' and may work if it was a darker colour of blue or another colour. Also you have a bit code that seems to have something wrong with it at the bottom of the pages... <a href="http://www.wix.com?embedID=nfKhZ9HIsz b8gswrpcrrDN1tUVUUZ5lduWS7eEIT p20jhHAwsC2YhtozaN2a74Lba

#5 (permalink)   08-04-2009 AdGenie New Member Company name: The Administrative Genie My latest Twitter: Administrative Genie w/15 years experience seeks E...   Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Newark, NJ Posts: 10 Re: Critiques Please... Thanks all of you for your responses. Will be making the suggested changes and reposting. __________________ Tameka E. Thomas TheAdministrativeGenie.com

#6 (permalink)   08-04-2009 donnaparadise New Member   Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 7 Re: Critiques Please... Very nice! I like the way you have the pages slide into view and the social links rotate. Very interesting presentation.

#7 (permalink)   08-04-2009 Rosebud Virtual Services Contributing Member   Join Date: May 2009 Location: Rosebud, Missouri Posts: 74 Re: Critiques Please... I absolutely love what you have done! I like the Client Needs Analysis. Great job! Dina

#8 (permalink)   08-04-2009 Business-Bytes Resident Member Company name: SunRise Virtual Solutions My latest Twitter: Get your free Facebook iframe fan page template ht...   Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Iowa Posts: 1,043 Blog Entries: 1 Re: Critiques Please... Originally Posted by AdGenie TheAdministrativeGenie.com Worked hard at it, but open to suggestions and not "married" to any of it. Thanks. I really like your site! My only critique is that I have to scroll horizontally because there is a lot of empty space to the right (it cuts off the right side of your content unless I scroll to the right, then you can see the empty space there [hope I explained that good enough ]). Super job! __________________ Jules, SunRise Virtual Solutions - WordPress Customization & XHTML/CSS Web Sites

#9 (permalink)   09-27-2009 thompsonassistants New Member Company name: Thompson Assistants My latest Twitter: What happened to the little boy in the balloon!??!   Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 48 Re: Critiques Please... Looks good! Obviously you know what you're doing with web design! There is a lot of info in a small amount of space in some areas. Just see what you can simplify. Looks great, otherwise! Good luck!